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melusin

59 Reviews | 6.15/10 (59 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drama Smut Drabble/100-Word Horror Potions Under Duress 4,245 Words 3 Chapters Complete

Post war, Hermione returns to sit her NEWTs to find Professor Snape a changed man. Drabble Series for GS100 Vampire! challenge.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

About melusin

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melusin

Member Since 2006 | 23 Stories | Favorited by 344 | 77 Reviews Written | 1,999 Review Responses

Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

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http://asylums.insanejournal.com/melusin_la_fey/

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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for Bitten

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10/10

Jinxie

He he he, nicely handled. Thanks for sharing!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks - glad you liked it

0/10

PHONELADY

wow im glad they will be ok.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

0/10

Allyll

Loved it! And you managed to have a happy ending! And funny too.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks, glad you liked it

10/10

debjunk

Cute ending, sort of. LOL. I'm glad she gave him his choice. Really, who wants a slave, although tempting it may be.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

0/10

Severus49

Great story! But, I have to ask, what was the red smoke??

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

ThanksNo idea - one of their experiments, I expect

0/10

Severus49

Well, at least Hermione's determined to make this pleasureable as possible for Severus!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

hmm... no. It's more about getting it over quickly by getting his blood to pump faster ;)

0/10

Severus49

Wow, this is good! A great twist on a Vamp story!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

10/10

Jinxie

Such a great mixture in this story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thank youone more set to go

0/10

debjunk

That was scarily evil. LOL

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

10/10

MuseAmusant

It's strange seeing Hermione as dominant over Snape at this point, but that's part of what makes this story so deliciously different. Especially given that I usually don't go for vampire stories, but there we are. Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story so far.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

Thanks - vampires aren't my thing either, and i wouldn't have written this if (a) it hadn;t been halloween and (b) I could write something a bit different. Glad you're enjoying it. :)

0/10

Allyll

Good chapter. Loved the sparkles? More, please!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks. One more to go

0/10

Elou

Wow...*blink blink*Holy mackeral. More???Thank you for sharing~

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanksone more part to go

0/10

PDamian

Oooh, I'm liking this ...

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thank you

7/10

sevibaby

Twilight this is not. So far, so good as a story line goes. Will look forward to your updates.

9/10

peskipiksi

Oooo goody - glad to hear there's more on the way!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

10/10

MuseAmusant

Funny that everyone assumes that Snape's a vampire, never knowing that one of their own classmates really is. Nice twist having Hermione be the vamp for a change. Looking forward to more!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks - more coming soon

10/10

debjunk

Wow, I love this premise already! Can't wait to see how it all goes.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks - more soon

10/10

Jinxie

Awesomeness!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thank you

0/10

marisamarinee

Oh! I'm hooked

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

good

10/10

HBAR

Complete with happy ending. Yay!

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks for reading :)

10/10

HBAR

Oooh, chilling to be sure. As for Severus, might as well find an enjoyable way to get the blood pumping. It is certainly the last time it will. She really seemed to not want to do this, but once she got started, I think she is getting quite wrapped up in it all. I hope things turn out okay.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

No, she doesn't want to condemn him to a half-life like she has, but once she lets her true nature loose, there's no stopping it

10/10

HBAR

I don't typically care much for vampire stories, yet here I am, and I find you've done this one justice by flipping things around and making Hermione the vampire. Nice touch. Now I must know more.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

not my cup of tea either, and there's not much new that can be said about it, but i thought i'd give it a go

0/10

Grado

Hmmmm. Will she turn him rightaway or try to find a cure before it's too late? Will he reconsider? I suppose with one vampire in the School they can't complain at another....but I don't think the parents would like it much. Such possibilities! More, please.More.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

more coming

9/10

Anonymous

A very fascinating beginning! I don't usually care much for vampire stories, but this one hooks me and I'm looking forward to where it will go.

Author's Response: thanks

0/10

Phyllidia

What a great twist! You made me . Glad to hear there is more to come.

Response from melusin (Author of Bitten)

thanks

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