Monsters under the Bed

peskipiksi

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General Hogwarts Castle 3,099 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Albus Dumbledore Armando Dippet Fenrir Greyback Rubeus Hagrid Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

A young Fenrir Greyback runs away from home and meets twelve-year-old Rubeus Hagrid.

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Chapter 1: Oneshot

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10/10

Fairfield

Quite good. Supplies background for the later actions of both Fenrir and Dumbledore.

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Thank you.

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

the ending seemed to change face very quickly; to me it felt like the part mentioning riddle seemed so out of character for this young fenrir as you'd written him so far. but otherwise I looked it. I don't think I've read a FG fic yet.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of Monsters under the Bed)

I'm sorry it seemed ooc; I was trying to show the moment when something switches in your brain as a result of anger/crushing disappointment/constant discrimination etc and you think "**** this; I'm out for myself now"!

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