Patterns
Doomspark8 Reviews | 7.5/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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Doomspark
Member Since 2005 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 152 | 35 Reviews Written | 531 Review Responses
Male. Married. Live in Florida. Owned by two Egyptian Maus, a red tabby, and a hairball-emitting pile of fluff.
Reviews for Patterns
I woke up with Simon & Garf' 'Patterns' running through my head, and then I saw your story - weird things like that get me intrigued, so of course I read it. I spent a few minutes just recognising little bits like 'up a narrow flight of stairs' and following all the other little bits and pieces that you have used. I didn't get to 'until the Rat dies' until after you revealed it was Peter Pettigrew. Brilliant mix of song/poem from when Pettigrew possibly could have been in school. 
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
I wrote Patterns years ago. Before OotP came out, even. And in all that time, you're the first person who has ever recognized the song that inspired it! Glad you liked it!
Very well written. I tried to guess who the person writing in his/her journal were before I reached the end, but I wasn't even close:-))
Totally happy to see that you are still writing fanfic, I hope we'll get to read even more of your talented writing in the future. (and if you think that comment was a badly veiled hint, you are probably rigth, I would do cartwheels if I saw a new update to "the Varlet":-)))
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
I'm working on it, honest! And Catspaws. And Golden Gain. And... and... and...If you do cartwheels, I wanna see a video of it!
Sly one, you are.... Just enough hints to keep us thinking we knew....
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
Thank you! That's what I was trying to do!
It's stories like this that actually make you feel a bit sorry for him. Very nice.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
Thanks! I was trying to get inside Peter's head and figure out why he betrayed his friends.
Ooohhh...interesting...well written and leaving me wanting more!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
...very, very well written, except Remus was the prefect, not Peter.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
Well, yes. Except that Patterns was originally written right after GoF came out, and we didn't know that.
I was amazed by how much this could have been Ron. Well done!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Patterns)
Thank you! I apologize for the delayed response. I appreciate all reviews.
I picked Peter halfway down. Definitely a possibility as to why he turned dark. :)