A great little story. Enough possibilities to keep me guessing, good pace, concise and treating the characters gently.I I love the way you describe the senses; sight, sound, scent, touch etc..I get strong visual images when reading your stories, which is not common when reading others.Thanks.

Bickering as foreplay.  Suits them! :)

thanks for writing and sharing Aurette.

Awwwww, how cute!!!! What a wonderful, witty story. Mrs. Helenesnape is a lucky gal!

Fabulous tale, loved it. Funny and beautifully written as always.

this was wonderful! Loved it and would welcome more!warm regards!

She narrowed her eyes. “Women bleed, Ron. Get over it.”And just as I was reading this, I was listening to Alice Cooper's 'Only Women Bleed' from his 'Welcome to My Nightmare' album.I laughed out loud several times while reading this little fic! Very nicely done! I love the bickering. I love how Ron realises that things are really and truly over for them when Hermione is bickering with someone else. And I especially like a post-break-up Ron who is likeable and still friends with Hermione.

That story is such a delight.

Oh, so very well done! Amazing as always, Aurette!

What a creative use of that prompt! This was really cute. I always lke that you treat Ron well in your stories. They clearly had something good once and it's nice to honor that, even though it didn't work out for one reason or another. Severus and Hermione seem to really lean on each other and it turns out so sweet. Thanks for another good story.

Love It !!!!!!!!!!!!!   Damn you - you did it again, Aurette!   I think you're my first author crush! Not over the top, not too snarky, not too modern,  just mmmmmmmmmmm... .!

OMGosh, PERFECT, I LOVE IT!!!  WOW THIS IS GREAT!!  WELL DONE!!!  AND I'D GIVE IT 10 stars if I could.....

Great story, fashioned out of a *very* cool prompt! I loved the sequence with the towel and the Incarcerious charm - pure Aurette! You made them perfect for each other - Snape and Hermione could not have happened to two nicer people than Hermione and Snape, if you know what I mean.

SWEET!  Loved it!

I think I love him too!!Oh, GUH, Aurette, this is a FABULOUS fic! Lucky Helene, who gave a great prompt, and got such a great prize! Thanks again, Aurette for providing this prize for the Exchange Bingo! :D~goes back to imagining the smell of wood smoke and feeling strong fingers kneading knots out of my neck~

I had this marked as read but don't remember reading it. Bright side of this is that it was like reading something new. Awesome job. Loved it.

This is was a complete delight.  Lovely to see a nice/funny Ron-Hermione, and you've captured well the odd relationship with an ex.

“Of course I’d come quickly,” Ron said with a warm smile.

Hermione smirked. “And that’s another reason we’re not together anymore.”

::snerk::

“Oh, joy,” he said snidely. “How fulfilling to have the three biggest thorns in my backside finally realize they were mucking up everyone’s plans and feel remorse. You can take your guilt and go bugger yourself with it, Granger. Just leave my fucking money alone.”

::dies laughing::

“Faux-Italian food is for philistines, and pasta will make your arse fat.” He kissed his way to her ear and bit it gently.

“Maybe I’m trying to grow a protective layer of fat so your boney hips won’t leave bruises.”

“If you exercised more you’d be more flexible. I wouldn’t have to struggle so much.”

Oh my gosh, these two are just hilarious -- and so exactly how I would expect things to go...

Such a delightful one-shot. Very in-character. I like the way she would argue with Ron and the later with Snape, and they way the playful arguments would lead to other things. So funny what turns some people on.

Somehow I never read this fic before - and I thought I had read them all - on ff, AO3 etc.I do love me some Snape.

Well greate work as allways. Thank you very much for this story it was nice 30 minutes in my lazy weekend afternoon. It got me back in the mood.

This is so cute!  Why haven't I read this before?!?  I'm so happy. 

<gaaaaaaasp> An SS/HG that I haven't read!?!? Oh, shame. Shame on me. I LOVE all of Severus' one word retorts. "like naked vengeance personified." I cheered, whooped and hollered, when i read that line!Very funny stuff, just the right amound of romance, with your brand of tension for good measure, all in all, a VERY wonderful read, and now I'm caught up on your stories!! Oh... One last thing <salutes> PS, I miss you.