Excellently done.

I thought this was brilliant! Asking folks to look closely at their own souls is often asking for trouble... I can totally see that in a situation like this. Thanks for a great read

Heartfelt and profound, your story was like the healing it professed.

“We have to hurt before we heal.” Well said, Hermione. And very true, especially given the wizarding world's history of shying away from uncomfortable truths.

It wasn’t until after class that he realized she may have needed the comfort more than he did.Love the way this flows. And I love the resolution; people began to listen.Sweetly done

This was lovely. I enjoyed the structure!

A good relationship where they can play on each other's strengths to reach the outcome.

Interesting that the more objective accounts were the ones to cause the distress... as it generally is in life. Indicates the differing motives behind writing.  Excellent. 

Brilliant! So clever and contrasting from both point of views - provocative and bittersweet - but: 'But people talked—and began to listen.'!

Brutal when we hold the mirror so high that everyone can see themselves - and then quickly look away...

That was fascinating.  And I like the bit of Dramione.

This was lovely.  Very touching!

Ooh, good idea on perspective! I like it :)

Hmm...I notice that line "The Granger-Malfoys....Does that mean they were married at that time, or that was the catalyst that brought them together?

Was a sound plan. :)

How on earth did you fit this much of a story into 499 words? I'm quite impressed. I'm also curious... Hermione's book on the 'Dark' wins her immediate success, while Draco's book on the 'Light' wasn't well received?  I suppose the adage about history being written by the winners is challenged by a book on the 'Good' by a Malfoy? Or they're just not ready for a critical look at "themselves," as they probably read themselves as extensions of Dumbledore and company? Very interesting...

Interesting take in that the unvarnished truth would tick off a fair number of people, too.

I really like this one.  The means by which they came together was entirely believeable, and I think by helping one another through the ordeal of post-war healing, they were better able to move on and write their book.  Of course people were angry.  That just goes to show that it was probably accurate.  Nicely done!

nice, realistic

Some good came out of these, evidently.

Makes me wonder if Hermione and Draco were healed by their writing more than anyone else? I'm glad Draco decided to ask her out. :)

I'm not sure how I missed this one, but it's very good -- excellent premise, very well written.  Thanks for sharing!