Under Cover
sweetflag21 Reviews | 21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Hermione pours her heart and soul into her memoirs; magic borrows them.
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Hello. I love reading and writing... what more can I say?
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*Very Big GRIN* ^_^
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. Glad to have made you grin :D
Intriguing. Nice use of the prompt.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review, and thank you for the compliment.
Wicked ink. I can picture that group changing passages back and forth between them up to the point where Hermione wouldn't recognize her text.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. It'll be the best in literary squabbling and letter writing.
I hope she doesn't check it over before sending it to the publishers.Great stuff!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. She'll get a shock when the critics respond. It'll probably be fun.
I can just picture Hermione's reaction to so much... creative editing. ;)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I know :) She'll sigh... she'll frown, she may even giggle... but will she edit? :D
Oh, Lucius! This was such a wild and unexpected take on the prompt.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I enjoyed the concept and the many 'alterations' that went through my mind.
I love the idea of the characters coming back to life through a memoir! Hermione really ought to be more careful - I just hope she proof reads before letting anyone else see this!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. It'll make the beta blush :D
Aww - c'mon Hermione, publish it! Publish it for all to enjoy!LOL! Love the dynamics of these characters - being ticked off and grumpy! 
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
She may... but unless she checks it, it'll likely be nothing like she penned. Thank you for the review.
Bella wrote that! Hee!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
She can be spiteful when she wants to be... and I wanted to keep this as low-rated as possible. Thank you for the review.
LOL. very clever. :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review.
Oooh, clever! I approve :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review.
I love the idea of all these ghosts having their say!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I like the idea too... bit like the portraits talking to each other and sharing frames, but here, they can constantly change and develop.
Oh, this was a fantastic original premise! I've only read one story that even comes remotely close to anything like this. Very innovative!!!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. To be honest, I was stumped, and this was the only thing I could come up: been kicking myself over some of the fab ideas the other writers have developed.
Oooh, fascinating sentient self-writing book. “I assure you, she never saw that much.” mmm, pity ;)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I had a cheeky impulse at that moment... I wondered what Lucius would consider more insulting: his bad reputation being attacked or his vanity.
Love that they're all existing in the pages together! Most inventive. And rather wise of the page, to drain ink like that. ;) Very original!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. Yes... who knows what had been written and by whom... and what had been altered... lol.
Oh, this was very different. I like the things that are getting changed, and it would certainly be interesting, for any character, to see how they would write themselves vs how others would write them.Magic seeks to be free; it craves to… beI like this concept!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I wish I'd had a few more words to play around with... but, alas, not in this story. And good luck with the challange. I enjoyed your last drabble.
Goodness. For a few of the fellas it sounds like Hermione went into great detail describing their attributes. Hmmm How does she know all that? :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. I'm sure that Hermione was as polite and objective as possible... but who wouldn't 'add' to certain characters, hmmm? lol.
heh heh. Everyone's plotting, I guess.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Under Cover)
Thank you for the review. And why not? lol. If you could slip into someone else's writing, what would you play around with? :D