In Hiding
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Pity one of the owls cages wasn't left open, it would have been justice.
Very well done.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, that would have changed a lot of things, wouldn't it. Still, I wouldn't have made any effort to save him. Thanks for the read and review.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, that would have changed a lot of things, wouldn't it. Still, I wouldn't have made any effort to save him. Thanks for the read and review.
urgh, how could you?! How could you make me sympathise with HIM?! 
An excellent little chapter that was (thankfully?) missing in the original.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Sorry! *pats you reassuringly* :)In the books, the details of this event are kind of vague, so it is hard telling how he got from Sirius to the Weasleys. It intrigued me.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Oooh! Chilling! I like this PoV ... very effective, and creative. You show that you are able to write romance, humor, and drama with equal ease--that isn't easy to do, and I commend you for stretching out of your comfort zone. Very well done!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, you know how much I fight leaving my comfort zone, but it happens occasionally. I'm glad you liked this.
i absolutely love "how percy found scabbers" stories. this was excellent!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thank you so much! It is really hard to know if something you write is any good. I hope the ability to discern such a thing comes with time and experience. I appreciate the read and review.
That sneaky, wee rat!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, he's a menace, that one. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
A very clever way of how wormtail ended up with Percy.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thank you.
I always knew Pettigrew was a creeper, but this takes it to a whole new level!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
I couldn't agree more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Now that's clever... and it neatly fits in with canon. Thank you for the good read.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Percy, you know you shouldn't take in strays! :0
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, let's hope he learns his lesson.
This really could have happened in canon - lovely take on the prompt!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. That is the beauty of fanfiction ... we get to fill in the holes of canon.
Oooh, rotten rotten rotten! Pettigrew, that slimy, rotten, no-good rotter!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Nothing more for me to say. I think you just about covered it all here :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
So that's what happened. ROFL.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
One of the many ways it could have gone down. If only Percy had kicked him to the curb ...
Oh, I did like that. I just wish he'd slipped into my messages though; I'd have hit with a spade when I found him.Super use of the prompt, and as Rose of the West suggested, a nice little vignette of a missing part of canon.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
The best kind of rat is a dead rat *hands you a spade* Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Ooh, Pettigrew, you son of a- hmph. Very well written.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, he is ... well, a rat. I'm pleased that you liked this.
The if-onlys in this story could turn the whole canon series upside down. So much potential for vanquishing a pest, yet somehow he managed to avoid all rat traps. Darn!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yes, if -only there were a store in Diagon Alley specializing in rat poison :)
Oooh very cool take on the prompt, well done
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Brilliant!! Simply, brilliant! Brilliant use of a very pivitol point in canon *goosebumps* - love the inner workings of Pettigrews mind - thank you mystery writer!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Oh, you've made my day! I am so glad you liked this. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Brilliant idea! You kept me guessing who it might be until almost the very end.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
This is so unexpected. And fabulous. And that last line, following the innocence of young Percy's request? Powerfully, powerfully disturbing.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Powerfully, powerfully disturbing.What a compliment! Thank you so much for your kind words.
Excellent! And that's how Scabbers came to the Burrow!
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Yeah, it seemed like a better idea than him wandering up through the sewer :)Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Ooo... interesting. That's a brilliant missing moment from the canon.
Response from HBAR (Author of In Hiding)
Thank you so much. I'm pleased that you liked this.