The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Repayment Chapter 5: Epilogue
Chapters Menu
Repayment

1: Chapter I

2: Chapter II

3: Chapter III

4: Chapter IV

5: Epilogue

Epilogue

Repayment

Chapter 5 of 5

flaminia_x

Hermione likes Remus. Remus likes Hermione. But what will it take for them to acknowledge their feelings for one another?

Romance Alternate Universe Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Hogwarts Castle 8,287 Words 5 Chapters WIP
Reviewed
Previous Chapter
↓ See Reviews & Actions ↓

The next month, Hermione accompanied Remus to Hogwarts to meet with Severus. She wanted to see him before the students came back later that week and thank him once again for his potions. And since Remus’ and Severus’ article in Potions International Magazine had not only caused quite a stir, but had won them a major commission from one of the leading potions suppliers to wizarding England, they had a lot of work to discuss. After a lovely dish of tea with Severus, she left them to talk shop, as it were, and went off to find Professor McGonagall for a nice chat.

“So. You two are ... an item now, I presume?” Snape inquired blandly.

Remus looked at him, surprised. He hadn’t expected the news to travel quite so fast; Harry and Ginny had only just owled them back with their blessing and congratulations. Still, Severus was nothing if not perceptive, so perhaps he shouldn’t be surprised after all. He nodded, answering, “We’re—whatever the younger folks say today. Dating? Ah well. One day at a time, as they say, right, Severus?”

They concluded their meeting, and as usual, Remus held out his hand, which Snape refused to shake, and saw himself out the door. From his window, he could watch as Remus and Hermione made their way back to Hogsmeade, hand in hand. It was about time those two bloody fools acknowledged their feelings for one another. Any idiot could have seen them mooning over each other for almost a year, and yet, given their stupid Gryffindor pride, it would have taken them an eternity to ever do anything about it. He smirked with satisfaction. Neither one had ever realized his part in their little romance, for which he was thankful, as one of them may have actually tried to share the details with him. Dreadful. He fingered his scar. A life for a life. His debt to Hermione Granger had been repaid.

FIN

Previous Chapter
↑ Back to the Top ↑

Story Actions

To follow, favorite, like, and more either log in or create an account.

Leave a Review

Log in to leave a review.

Latest 25 Reviews for Repayment

15 Reviews  |  3.33/10 Average

0/10

Bentwaters

I enjoyed this tremendously. Loved the Severus part very much. And the couple were just as cute as can be. Great read! Thanks so much for sharing!

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  So glad you enjoyed it!  :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Great update, I really like this story so far:-))

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks, glad to hear it!!  Not much more left, so I hope the ending suits your fancy.  :)

10/10

esmelle

I'm sorry to see this story come to an end but I like the happy conclusion. Severus does have a heart even if he doesn't want anyone to know it. Thanks.

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks for a nice review!  So glad you enjoyed the story.  I always like to think of Severus as a secret softie, but he can't let on, or it'd ruin his street cred.  :)

0/10

katiecastiel

Another excellent chapter! hmmm...I wonder what (or who!) gave Hermione the nerve? haha ;-)

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

;-)  Hope the ending is satisfying for you!!  

0/10

reader76

So, are you going to out the architect of the little evening or not?

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Ah, speculation is such fun, is it not?  Just a little bit more left to go ... :)

0/10

wannabewolfe

Thank goodness they admitted their feelings to one another - those two have already shown that they are willing to suffer in silence. Their joining was very passionate and uninhibited - you did their moment justice.

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

What a nice compliment!  Thanks!!  And yes, it's about time, eh??  :)

0/10

wannabewolfe

I am really enjoying this so far and am really looking forward to find out how things progress between them. I think Severus might be giving them a little push through potions to help settle his debt to Hermione.

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Glad you're liking it!

0/10

katiecastiel

Good chapter. It's very cute how comfortable Remus and Hermione are with each other.

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  I always thought they of all the folks stuck in Grimmauld, they'd get along pretty well!  Glad that came across.  :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Great update

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  Looking forward to seeing what you think of the rest!

10/10

esmelle

Great beginning! Can't wait to find out if Severus' repayment is going to be good or evil.

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  Whether you like or hate Snape, he's always interesting, so I hope you like how it all turns out!  :)

0/10

GryffKat

Yup, hooked me too

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

hahaha excellenta  glad you like it thus far.  .l

0/10

Bentwaters

Hmmmm, ok I'll bite.. you hooked me in. More please!

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Haha! Thanks!  It's coming soon!

0/10

katiecastiel

This is very interesting so far. Great start! I can't wait to read more :-)

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it!  More is on the way!

10/10

Sampdoria

What a very intriguing first chapter, I am really looking forward to read more of this:-))

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it - the rest is on its way!

0/10

reader76

What an intriguing beginning.  

Response from flaminia_x (Author of Repayment)

Thanks!  Hope you like the rest!  :)

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules