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Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV
Amita5 Reviews | 6.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
One should not have a life-altering experience after thirty-five - Hemingway
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I still have no idea what's going on, but I'm amused.
Response from Amita (Author of Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV)
The characters and author are confused too if that helps. It's Saturday and drabble time: the character who was most successful the last epoch will have the most problems adjusting to the new age, and outside forces are required, which implies the next episode will have to go offstage to free her.
Oy, vey!!! What adults can come up with! Well, at least Teddy had some fun! Oh, yeah - and some bad guys got caught anyhow!
Response from Amita (Author of Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV)
All the adults were striving mightily to do the right thing and be clever, and they improved family relations and their pocket book although the manor (and the rose garden) took a hit. Thanks for the comments.
Oh, how funny! I'm enjoying all of these, but was particularly moved to comment on this one... Narcissa's hex was hilarious, and poor Hermione is just convinced that dire things happened and she could have solved it all had she only been there. Looking forward to see what future twists and turns await our cast of characters!
Response from Amita (Author of Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV)
Thanks. You caught the gist of this episode. Have no idea what will happen next.
*snort* Warning: do not read this story while eating. Regurgitation may occur.Really, taking on Mary Poppins now? What's next? Winnie the Pooh? Oh, wait. I think someone already did that one. *grin* Good story, but the warning stays. I almost choked on my breakfast while reading this. ^_^
Response from Amita (Author of Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV)
A splendid review although Mary Poppins would not approve of choking.
Enjoyed the beginning and ending with a bit of a curmudgeonly Hermione, still fuming, and all the criminal activities and counter-action to thwart them goings-on in between, with insight into the dilemmas of the Malfoys and Tonks', and the manor--and the rose garden--ha! Lovely, frolicsome one-shot!
Response from Amita (Author of Redemption on the Installment Plan - IV)
Thanks. Hermione is failing to connect with others and it is affecting her. The madcap misadventure did bring Andy back to her remaining family.