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Perfection

Aylarah

12 Reviews   |   12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word Petulant_LDWS 553 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Draco Malfoy Harry Potter

Draco has always searched for perfection.

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Chapter 1: Perfection


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10/10

sweetflag

I enjoyed this drabble, thank you. I did like the idea that he was using coffee to rate his relationships... or maybe using his relationhsips to dictate his appreciation of the coffee.  Either way, it was a lovely ending to seeking perfection in both.

0/10

silverdoe

I love this. Definitely one of my top three for the week. Well done.

0/10

nagandsev

Poor Ernie... but I have to side with Draco about the instant!  Sweet ending - love it that Draco took control & received another kind of satisfaction from seeking the perfect coffee - sweet!

0/10

peppermint

I love how Draco's relationships are all summed up by coffee - too strong, too sweet, no staying power. Nice metaphors. 

0/10

debjunk

This was really cute.  At least Draco has a guage for what he wants.  LOL

10/10

HBAR

Poor Ernie.  Maybe he and Lavender could hook up.  Surely her tons of sugar would improve the instant coffee :)  At least Draco knows what he wants (and so does Harry, apparently).  Nice job.

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

I'm glad Harry got his man :)

0/10

sunny33

Fussy bugger, isn't he? :)

10/10

Owlbait

Poor ernie, but i can empathise on the instant coffee

10/10

Aurette

lol!  I don't know whether to feel happy, or sorry for Draco.  Good job!

0/10

Rose of the West

I love the metaphor in "instant, failed relationship." Interesting that it took Draco so long to order coffee. I bet he wished he'd done that sooner!

10/10

blue artemis

Awww, cute.  Poor Ernie, though.

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