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Bill Weasley finds something even more satisfying on a hunt for a good cup of coffee.
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"Bill wolfed down the sweet," his heightened sense of smell, the predatory smile - these are all lovely details to capture the eldest Weasley son. Bill with his 12 N.E.W.T.s, Hermione being Hermione... it makes sense, doesn't it?
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Thank you very much. I really like wolfy-Bill, he's fun to play with.
Wow, Billl wastes no time, does he? Of course you won't see me complaining about that. Hermione needs a nice mature Weasley, and I think one just walked into her life. Nice job.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Nope, no time wasted. Hermione gets my favorite Weasley, and he gets good coffee (among other things). Thanks!
How satisfying that they found each other.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Thank you!
Bill's quite the predatory animal after a cup of coffee.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
The effect of caffeine on those bitten by werewolves is well documented. (In my head, anyway.) ;) Thanks for the review!
I wouldn't say no to a kiss from Bill, either. Lucky Hermione!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
I'd have to agree. Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, yay! Glad he found her, if she was lost.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
She was in hiding. But he's certainly glad he found her. Thanks!
Wow! You packed a lot of plot onto a little fic! Good job! AND this is the first one to actually make me hungy. Points to you!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
I was told once that comedic drabbles were my forte. I'm trying to write longer fics, but short ones are a lot of fun. Thanks!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
I was told once that comedic drabbles were my forte. I'm trying to write longer fics, but short ones are a lot of fun. Thanks!
Those wolfish senses of the smartest Weasley do come in handy, don't they? Found himself a damn fine cup of coffee and a fine witch too. Nice!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Thank you! He certainly got more than he bargained for.
Great story. Love the smell technique.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Many thanks! My dad would judge restaurants that way. We'd stop if it passed his smell test.
Now, HE'S a cute Weasley! Imagine, where a cup of coffee could lead you...
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
He's my favorite Weasley. You followed my train of thought there quite well.
Love the palpable desire in this one!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Thank you! I wanted that desire evident.
I'm glad Bill found her :)
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
So was I! And so were they. Thanks!
What a very satisfying discovery, absolutely brilliant!!!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Thank you!
Love it that it's set in SF! Love the immediate chemistry & Bill's Gryffindor bravery + wolfish instincts-'my little brother is an idiot!' - HA! Love the uses of his senses in finding something much better & acting upon it - really enjoyable!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
I believe that food and relationships are best enjoyed with all your senses. Thanks for reviewing!
Mmmm lucky Herms!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
I'd have to agree. Thanks!
I like Bill better than Ron too. :)
Response from blue artemis (Author of Much Better)
Ron gave up on them twice. I can't bring myself to like him very much. Thank you!