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Seeking

sunny33

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Drabble/100-Word Petulant_LDWS 569 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Name Withheld (surprise)

He seeks his past in the perfect brew.

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Chapter 1: Seeking


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oh, ew. Random, unlikely meeting, plus Remus/Severus. Name withheld really didn't prepare me for that. Perhaps a slash warning? It was very, very well written until the reveal, but then again, that's more personal opinion.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thanks for your thoughts.  Problem was, if there was a slash warning it would give away the ending to some extent, and as the slash was only the suggestion of an unfulfilled love, I thought it would be okay.  Sorry if it offended you. :)

Response from HermioneJeanSnape (Reviewer)

Oh, not offended. I just really don't like Snape slash. Remus/Sirius doesn't bother me. I just get squicked by Remus/Snape, Harry/Snape, etc. Personal opinion, like I said :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

LOL. My personal bugbear is Sirius. Just don't like him... with anybody! :)

0/10

herbologist

I love the rhythm and imagery of this piece. Very artfully done.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

10/10

chivalric

Dreamy_Dragon rec'ed this fic (despite the pairing, which is not hers ;-) and I love it. Despite I'm not into coffee, not at all. But into the pairing. Wonderfully written, I can feel his pain and smell the fragrances and understand his emotions. Perfection.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.  I appreciate you stopping by to review.

10/10

HBAR

The door swings open, releasing three leather-jacketed strangers who glance without interest at the newcomer as they head off into their own storiesI love this line!It didn't seem like this was going to have a happy ending, but there it is.  Yay!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

10/10

sweetflag

This is beautiful. I can't say anything else... it's just beauty on a screen.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you. :)

0/10

nagandsev

Lovely - love the flow and rythym, the overall poignant tone/mood - beautiful work!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Found!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Yep!

0/10

debjunk

I truly enjoyed this, the descriptions are lovely.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

0/10

peppermint

Ohhhhhh my. Oh. My. Remus has found his perfect coffee and Severus - I have found a perfect drabble. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

LOL. A good combo then?

10/10

kittylefish

this is really beautiful.  and features my favorite pairing, served up very nicely.  :D

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Knew you'd like it.

0/10

Rose of the West

Oh, so much sadness and loss in there, and then at the end to find something... lovely.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thanks, Rose.

10/10

Owlbait

Just lovely

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thanks.

10/10

Aurette

"...as they head off into their own stories."  I love this line so much.  Thank you, this one was very sweet.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

10/10

MuseAmusant

Very subtle, as slash pieces go. Nicely done.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thanks.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, I wasn't expecting that.  Nice.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Goodie.  You weren't supposed to expect it!

0/10

Josie

I could almost taste it! And I loved the format.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

0/10

Severus49

Ah, you did your homework well! And just the subtlest hint of slash, but not enough to even turn me all squicky over it. Very well done!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Google knows everything, and I know Google... LOL

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is beautiful!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Seeking)

Thank you.

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