Poor Severus and the witches in his life--he sought a more tranquil existence, but it seems that Parvati, Hermione, and Astoria are each in different levels of distress and need from him--no peace for the wicked and it does seem he is enjoying the different demands on his expertise in all things. Wonderful level of erotic, supernatural personification of the Manor, an entity in heat, possessing Astoria--very provocative and enticing--Severus seems to have the situation and witches under control--or at least pleasurably manageable! How long will he be able to pacify all of the dear ladies in his life? 

He so loves a lady in lust - I mean, distress!

Only two sticks of Dynomite???  lol  Interesting beginning, can't wait to see where you are going with this.  :D

Ooooo...creepy, but very creative!  It appears that Malfoy Manor has a mind and a will of its own.  Somehow, I doubt that Narcissa experienced anything similar -- if she had, I don't think she would have left Astoria to face it alone.  It would be very interesting to find out what happened when Lucius, Narcissa, and Draco returned "home" since the Manor has clearly chosen Astoria as its true chatelaine.  (I see that Severus is still involved with Parvati as well...are we ever going to find out why she's trying to get revenge against her fiance?)

Well, that was interesting, but I have to admit to not really understanding the point of the story. Also, why is this in the 'potions under duress' category?

Sounds like a few other things have taken on a life of their own, as well.