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To Be a Woman
Savva23 Reviews | 7.39/10 (23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Two men, one woman – a story as old as the world itself. A twist – two powerful wizards will clash over one brilliant witch. Love. Friendship. Rivalry. Deceit. Severus Snape/Lucius Malfoy/Hermione Granger. AU. OOC. DH partly ignored.
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Latvian born. An absolute dilettante.
Age - born in 1970
Profession - meteorology & environmental engineering, currently - a housewitch
Marital status - married (second time around), two kids.
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Reviews for To Be a Woman
Ugh. It stop here. Please come back to this story and add more!!! I really want to know what happens next. Pretty please!!!
The stage is set for a grand adventure. I look forward to seeing how Hermione's Beau is picked and whom it will be.
Aaaargh! Just when you think you've trained yourself to check anything the Random Story option throws up to see if it's complete, you get to a horrendous cliff-hanger that reminds you forcefully that you aren't as well trained as you thought.
Bookmarking this now to make sure I don't miss what happens next. I wonder if Severus will have the sense to grovel straight away or whether Casimir will have to kick him into touch again. Will Hermione and Lucius's lunch date make the gossip columns? Will Lucius, in fact, ever get to share Hermione's favours, even if he is a total arse who sees her as a political accessory? And I shall stop waffling now.
Great chapter!! Hmm, I wonder what Mr. Malfoy is planning now... haha ^_^
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Something devious for sure. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing. Savva.
You my dear are an amazing writer, this is such great fun. I have read this before on another site I believe, it must have been a while since you last updated so I started from the beginning and I am so glad I did. Please do not abandoned this story.
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Thank you so very, very much for reading and reviewing my story. I am so happy and honoured that you liked it. I promise, I will not abandon this story. It is almost complete and, even thought, it didn't went exactly where I thought it would, I will finish it. Thank you again for all your wonderful, wonderful review and support. Savva.
What a great chapter, love it.
I enjoy your style of writing, and the fun banter between Lucius and Severus. Still not a fan of Lucius. Severus on the other hand, has always been my hearts darkest desire. Though, some seem to find him repulsive I find him quite perfect. His strong features including that absolutely gorgeous nose along with that voice, how could anyone resist him? I like the Neville and Luna pairing they do seem to fit well together. I enjoyed how you describe Hermione and her clothes for the evening.. I do hope Severus gets to see what is underneath that beautiful dress. hee hee
Poor Ginny, she had loved him for so long it was good that she had Quidditch to fall back on rather than whither away. I for one never found the relationship between Ron and Hermione to be a lasting one, as it seems many share this thought. Draco the poor dear has never had to think for himself and was pulled into a life he would not have chosen, true he was a bully but he was only mimicking his father. I feel sad for his Mum, she truly loved him above all else, I am glad she had the strength to leave Lucius. I have never been fond of him since the only person he ever looked out for was himself, putting his wife and only child in constant danger for his own gain. I will never forget how he treated Dobby just before Harry gave him his sock. That man was just pure evil and I find it hard to see him in any other way. Interesting story, I can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing.
What to wear, what to wear? An important question no matter how famous you are. :)
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Yup, it's always a dilemma.
So... where is the next chapter? Fantastic. I love the style of the story, and appreciate the wrok that went in to the grammar.Cheers,-Kat
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Next chapter is here :) Thank you very much for your lovely review. Savva
Oh how could she? Severus is going to be beside himself and pissed beyond belief. Damn him for not going, well she did ask and he wouldn't go for her. But still Good God Women think about what your doing. Severus may be in the same house with LM and bear the same mark but he is not mean, self centered and devious like Malfoy. Aurgh. I wish I could give her a good slap. LOL funny how a quirky little story can bring out such emotion from a reader isn't it. LOL Please, please make things right for them. :-)
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Oh well, she is only human, I guess. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and support.
Aggghhh, if you could make a decission when things turned extremely messed, this would be it.
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Indeed...
I love the tiny toady elf. Severus should pay more attentio to him. He needs advice.
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Lol. Casimir is a true treasure for Severus. Thank you, my darling, so much.
Ha ha! Casimir is priceless!!! The scene between him and Severus is hysterical! " No drinks! Master goes and brings Missy back to eat French dinner. Master goes now and brings Missy back." How can Severus argue with that? I'm lovin' this story. Thanks for sharing it!
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Thank you. I am so happy that you like my story and Casimir in it.
Snape 1 Malfoy 0 :D
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story. I truly appreciate your support. It was really needed. Thank you very, very much again. Savva.
On one hand, she has the man she fancies, who is a complete duffer at relationships, and on the other, she has the man who is smooth and charming, but not her type... :)
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Oh yes, decisions, decisions. Lol. Thank you. Savva
Uh oh. Poor Sev. :)
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Our stubborn Potions master is in trouble.
I love the slightly old-fashioned, quirky tone of this with the inserts from the author. :D
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Thank you, I am so happy and honoured that you like my style.
Oh Lucius, find someone else. Your thoughts and behavior are not flattering. Severus, where are you? Poor Hermione. I hope she uses that Gryffindor courage and contact Severus. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Savva (Author of To Be a Woman)
Yes, I agree - Lucius is not at his best there. ;) Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
I just started this story and I'm in love, with your style of course! This story is so much fun to read. Keep up the good work.
You have a very interesting narrative voice through this story. : )