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Epithalamium
Squibstress146 Reviews | 6.75/10 (146 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
It's 1943, and both the wizarding and Muggle worlds have exploded into war. Eighteen-year-old Minerva McGonagall is brilliant and talented, with dreams of becoming the first witch in the Auror corps. Albus Dumbledore is famous, powerful, and haunted by his dark past. Their attraction to one another is unthinkable, inevitable, and dangerous, especially with Tom Riddle watching from the shadows.
As their paths cross again and again, their lives change in ways neither anticipates, and they find they must confront the man who will become the greatest threat the wizarding world has ever known.
Warning: Teacher/student (of age)
Winner - 3rd Place, Best Romance (Minerva McGonagall) - Fall/Winter 2013 HP Fanfic Fanpoll Awards
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Squibstress
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I'm a middle-aged, professional writer of non-fiction and would-be professional writer of fiction who also writes Harry Potter fanfiction just for fun.
I’m a proud member of the Harry Potter Old Lady Smut Brigade, which means I’m most interested in the older female characters in the Harry Potter saga, particularly Minerva McGonagall.
If I had received my Hogwarts letter back in nineteen-mumble-mumble, I would most likely have been sorted into Ravenclaw, or so everyone tells me, probably because I’m a geeky data-freak (my Real Life™ requires me to read piles of medical journal articles.) I, however, think I’d feel right at home in Hufflepuff too, so I consider myself a Ravenpuff.
The fics I write may contain adult themes, and I will always warn for non-con, graphic violence, bestiality, incest, or underage sex. I don't warn for homosexual relationships or sex, or for threesomes/moresomes, unless they contain one of the aforementioned elements.
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Reviews for Epithalamium
Ooh, excellent suspenseful ending to the chapter! (On top of last night's finale to Sherlock, Season 2, more suspense than I can stand in one 24-hr period!)
Wonder how Albus will handle telling MInerva, and how she will react. And what Meadowes and Filius will make of it all.
As you already know, I had some peavy issues with this chapter, mostly because I found both of their attitude towards having kids to be a bit cold - aside from my own issues with YOUR characters (meaning I have no business deciding how they should be written) the chapter works really well to address a big issue in a partnership - and further gives us quite a bit of insight into Albus' history and mind set.
You also do a brilliant job describing Riddle's descent into his own delisional superiority - and I love how you work canon into your story and weave your own story around what we already know from J.K.'s books.
Now - what I love most about this chapter - and which far outweighs my grumpy grumps, is how you clearly show us just how long its been since Albus has felt love, and how alien it is to him - and why he's likely as paranoid as he is about anyone and everyone, and likely why he has refused to allow Minerva to love him for such a long time - or allow himself to indulge his love for her. That insight makes a lot of his previous actions a lot more logical.
Good job!
She is very much like Hermione. Looking forward to follow this story
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
They do share some characteristics, don't they?Thanks for reading!
A big, long, fat review coming soon, when I can find the correct copy of this in my drafts folder... sorry for my absentmindedness - I just didn't want to miss anything that I already wrote down - because this chapter made me laugh out loud quite a few times - and I loved it, of course.A few points before I go back to digging around on my pc - I loved Einar's reaction to Minerva marrying Albus - I enjoyed meeting Kathrine and seeing wee Morrigan again, of course, I loved Amelia in this - she's such a hoot, and especially loved Filius - as I've told you before, you write him in such a natural way and display his uniqueness and power so humbly - as well as his very natural and relaxed relationship with Albus - Filius' knowledge about home security wards (and your creativity for making all that up) was completely brilliant.As usual - Epith never lets me down and your work just gets better and better. More detail later!*claps* Another well written chapter - and I'm completely overjoyed that this yarn continues to grow and grow when (a year ago) you claimed it would be finished by now... *winks* I love that you're still writing it!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Glad you enjoyed it, especially Amelia. She's so much fun to write because it's nice to give Minerva a bit of a foil.Thank you so much for the beta and all the kind words!
I just read through this again - and I had to say...Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! *grins*Just needed some Albus/Minerva fluff tonight!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Thanks!Will try to provide a bit more fluff soon.Hugs!
I loved this chapter - much here to really appreciate - and what I love most, perhaps, is the tenderness we see in Mineva - which is a rare insight into her soul - she's a stern person, a determined and calculated person who holds tight to all of her most intimate sides - does not show her compassion in public often, if at all - and here she is being so tender with Albus and I just love that - love that she can be that open and trusting with him - because, we know, that people do not guard their inner most feelings for any other reason than to avoid pain - to avoid strife - and if we know anything about Minerva, it is that she is guarded and extreamly careful - so this little peek into her intimate nature is sweet.I also loved seeing Man/Albus here - not that I want him to be vulnerable - but I enjoy seeing that he too, is made vulnerable by his love for Minerva - its wonderful to see that he, too, is mortal just like the rest of us.And I'm quite glad that moments like this are few - while they are precious, they are even more so because they are so rare - if they were this open with their fears regularly, these moments wouldn't be so dear.As I told you before when I read over the chapter earlier, the insight you give us into Riddle's mind is brilliant and probably the best example I've seen of how the man has become the lunatic he is - brilliant lunatic, to be sure, but a lunatic all the same.I don't admire Riddle, can't stand him really, and don't wish to give him any praise to be sure, he's a scourge, a plague on humankind, and something not to be admired, but understood, if only to aid in preventing future such persons from taking hold of power - none the less, I think you've done a brilliant job of bringing forward his sheer paranoia and insanity in a way that helps us understand more, just what it means to be such a souless, self-centered, blight of all that is good in the world.Squibby, as always, you never cease to amaze me.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Many thanks, my dear, for your thoughtful remarks and for giving this a read earlier. It's a big help.I didn't intend to get so deeply into Riddle here, but JKR gives us so little that I seem to get caught up in backstory for him whenever I bring him into a scene.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh - I also forgot to mention - I really love the history you wove into the explanation of Riddle's ability to create the dark mark - I love how you wove actualy history into magical fiction - and the nod you provided, intentionally or unintentionally, toward a linquistic influence that we see even in Tolkien's work. When a writer can use actual history in a story, it adds a layer of credibility to the immersion - thus making the story more believable as well as adding more depth.
It pleases me that Minerva lets herself be talked into a family wedding!
However, the end of this chapter concerns me, because I think the knowledge that Riddle has threatened Minerva will frighten Albus, and it will break my heart if he leaves her now.
Great chapter as always!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Poor Minerva. A wedding, of all things!We shall just have to see what Minerva does regarding Tom Riddle.Thanks for reading!
*snip*"Well," said Morna. "I'm happy to hear it. A baby on the way is a blessing, but it's a poor reason to get married, in my opinion. I'm glad I don't have to talk you out of it."*snip**sings Morna's praises* Glad this family is full of wisdom! Quick - lets clone them all and improve the gene pool!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ahhh, and more reason to hate Riddle, the filthy little toe rag of wizarding society... I so wish Minerva didn't fear him.
*snip*Morna crossed to Albus, and she tugged on his sleeve to get him to lean down so she could kiss his cheek. "I'm forward perhaps, but now that you'll be joining the family, you'll just have to put up with it," she said, releasing him.*snip*I've not had the pleasure to get to know Morna too much, until this chapter, and I find her absolutely wonderful! Thanks for giving us a peek into her life.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"Yes. Severe emotional upset can have an effect on one's magic," said Albus. "Thorfinn, I am sorry. I had no idea. If I had known, I would have tried to contact her while I was in hospital—""But of course ye didn't know. How could ye?"Another small stone of guilt dropped into Albus' belly. He had thought about Minerva during his convalescence in Dresden, but his thoughts had been completely selfish, mostly reminiscences about the time they had spent together. He hadn't really thought about how his ostensible disappearance might affect her.*snip*I really appreciate this - both that Thornfinn made Albus aware, if he wasn't already - of just how much Minerva loved him - which I'm not sure if he's doing conciously - or not - it seems he's trying to do it conciously - as if to say "you had better appreciate what you've got Albus - because my daughter loves you so very much - don't you dare hurt her"...And then we get a glimpse into Albus' mind, how he really had no understanding of what he had done to her... and his guilt is very approrpriate... that was well done. A good subtle look into both men.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"No," he said quietly. "I didn't know."*snip*And I think a brilliant man like Thornfinn - who is also a very observant man - knows right here that Albus did know - and that their relationship went back further than both would care to admit - I think Albus just told him through his denial.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"No more than the concerns any father has when his child chooses a mate, I think," said Thorfinn. After a few moments, he added, "She won't be an easy wife. I'm sure ye know that. But then I expect ye won't be an easy husband.""I only want to make her happy.""I know. But Minerva's responsible for her own happiness. I only ask that ye love her and that you're good to her."*snip*I loved Thornfinn before all this, and secretly wished I had a father like him - well hell, a father, grandfather, brother, mate, anything - but right here - he just gained 1000 points in my book - his brilliance, common sense and courage to speak his mind and lay the cards on the table - knowing that each of us is responsible for our own well being - and telling Albus exactly what he thinks/feels - well the man has completely won me over.... *sighs* He's a widow, can I have him? *makes puppy dog eyes* I promise I'd be really, really good!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*points to the last question and continues to make puppy dog eyes*Since Albus is already taken...
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Widower... *coughs* my bad...
*snip*"Oh. I don't think I'll be looking for anything over which to fight your father," answered Albus. "He'll be liable enough to want to thump me as it is." "Are you nervous about telling him?" she asked."Aren't you?" he asked, in lieu of answering her question. This time, she found it more endearing than annoying.*snip*Ahh ha! I see what once used to annoy her is now growing on her as, just one, of our dear Albus' eccentricities! *grins* Very nice, Madam Tabby! *winks*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"Very sure, Minerva. My mother always intended to pass it on. She would want you to have it. Can you read the inscription?" he asked.She took the ring from the box and held it close to her face, then a bit farther away, saying, "I'm beginning to think I need glasses . . . is it Runic?""Yes. Can you make out what it says?""Is this a test, Professor Dumbledore?" she asked with a wry smile."You did score 'Outstanding' on your Ancient Runes N.E.W.T., Miss McGonagall. Surely you can translate a simple epigraph?""Hmm," she said, turning the ring several times. "Futhorc, isn't it?""Very good, my dear. Now what does it say?""Give me a light from your wand, Professor, and I'll try to suss it out."*snip**Just sits here grinning*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"It's true, my dear," said Albus. "The chapter you wrote with the Muggle-born scientist was among the best in the book, I thought. In fact, I must say that it helped frame my own opinions on the Statute and its limitations. It reinforced for me as I read it how much further advanced both our societies would be if there were greater opportunities for collaboration.""Yes, and I think the potential benefits are far greater for wizarding society than for Muggles," said Minerva, warming to the topic. "After all, Muggles are never going to have magic; they may benefit from new knowledge gleaned by magical means—if we are ever allowed to share it—but any practical applications that depend on magic will remain the province of wizards. Muggles will have to work out their own ways of exploiting our discoveries. Wizards and witches, on the other hand, can benefit from Muggle technology. Goodness knows we don't have magical applications for every problem, and until we can devise some, we are just as dependent on mundane technology as Muggles. It's only our inherent prejudices against non-magical methodologies that keep us from benefitting from what they've already developed. Just look at travel, for example. When I went to Salem, it took me five days on a ship—a Muggle ship, by the way; there aren't many wizarding ships making the crossing. We can't Apparate or Portkey over such a long distance, so mostly we don't go. But Muggles have come up with a way to cut that time to less than a day. They've been crossing the Atlantic in these sorts of flying boats since before their last war. It only takes them about fourteen hours to get from here to New York. I'd imagine, if we would only consider learning from their technology, that we could develop versions of these aircraft and enhance them with magic. But our laws largely prohibit that kind of collaboration."*snip*Throughout all your tales involving Minerva - which is most - you never fail to show us just what a brilliant woman she is, and often compassionate, kind, thoughtful and resilent, but this here truly shines as her amazing worth in the scientific field - AND offers up a rarely seen glimpse into the wizarding world's ideas of the Muggle world - giving us another aspect or, rather, opinion, other than the typical - wizarding kind are superior to Muggle kind - you get my meaning - its a brilliant way to show that these mages - this small sliver of wizarding society - is far more intelligent than the average witch or wizard... far more so - they're looking past the obvious, past the expected and into the infinite - and those who dare to look at infinity are usually among the top 1% of intelligence this world has to offer.
How lovely to discover a new chapter!
I am constantly amazed by your incredible talent and I have found that I have become somewhat obsessed with your wonderful story.
I have read so many Albus/Minerva stories, but no one like this, I have found myself thinking "yes that is how it should be written" several times. Can not understand that you are using your talent to write fan fiction, but I'm god damn happy about it! But you should know that if you were to start writing stories with your own characters and your own world, I would be extremely interested in reading it. Until then, be an angel and do not let me wait too long for the next chapter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Why, thank you.I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. It's been fun writing it, although it's turning out to be far longer than I originally envisioned, LOL!I have a new chapter in the works, and I hope to post it in a few days.
A very interesting chapter and one I appreciate - we all know Albus was a complicated man and that often, he seemed to be unkind or, at times, cruel, while in reality, he was always trying to do what was best - even if his intentions were obscure. I appreciate the explanation for why he was that way - why he felt he had to carry so much responsibility, and how very serious he took that responsibility - and, atop that, how he was so very hard on himself - a true perfectionist when it came to his own self - though when we look at his judgement of others - he's quite the opposite - being considerate of others' failures and finding value in most, despite their mistakes or misdeeds. I think its important that we see how Albus handles his own responsibilities, and how harsh he is in his self judgement.I also like that Albus wishes to use his mother's wedding ring for Minerva - that truly shows how very much he loves her - and while I don't appreciate how crass and cruel Aberforth is here - or anywhere, it makes sense that his jealousy would take over - once again, his brother was getting a boon in life that he seemed forsaken to have - a wife in this case - a partner, a lover - which I guess we are to assume, Aberforth is incapable of maintaining - at least in any meaningful way.I also loved the subtlety of Thornfinn and Morna in their glace to eachother when Minerva mentions inviting Albus to dinner... that was classic McGonagall!As always, your work is a joy to read.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Thanks, hon.Yes, I was feeling quite sorry for our beareded wizard as I wrote this. I do think he has an outsized sense of responsibility, which often goes hand-in-hand with an outsized ego. I think, growing up "brilliant," he has come to expect others not to quite live up to expectation (which is one reason Minerva confounds him--she does) but he isn't prepared to forgive himself when he doesn't.I wanted the ring to be a symbol of the endless, pointless squabble between the brothers, and of how Albus is the luckier brother, not just in terms of finding love, but in being able to move forward from the past (albeit with difficulty), whereas Aberforth has stuck himself in a vault of his own choosing--anger and resentment. Aberforth's curse is that he sees many things more clearly than Albus does, but he's stuck just the same.Yes, I think Thorfinn and Morna know a bit more than they let on.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its very sad that Aberforth is so stuck in his own pain - and its perfectly canon - as he never grew out of that in the novels - he held on to that anger until his dieing days - but I find it overwhealmingly sad that he is stuck there - when he has such potential to be happy - however - its extreamly realistic - how many people like him do you know? I know many.... and its just as you said - stuck in a "vault" - a vault where nothing changes - life is sterile and no growth can be allowed - that's a perfect analogy.
That, my dear Squibby, was brilliant - I love how you show one small aspect of wizarding society that Minerva excells at, and Albus does not - but you don't stop there - you show us the beginings of how they work together - as a team for Hogwarts, and how their mutual love, respect and trust work together to benefit so many - I love how you write these two, and above all things, I love how you've kept the respect in tact that they both have for each other, despite the painful decisions each made in their past - despite the painful break up, despite the war, despite Minerva's attempt to make him jealous at the ball.... despite all that, they continue to respect each other - and I love that.I love seeing them working together for the school, supporting one another on ideas and such - that just warms my soul. Gives me hope that there ARE relationships that are not so mired in jealousy, animosity, fear, anger and deception.... that there are still people out there - even if they're ficticious - that love each other in a healthy manner, despite the amazing and often terrifying reality that swarms around them.Bravo Madam Tabby! Bravo! Hug Mr. Squib for me - you can't write Albus as tender and loving that you do, without knowing that kind of love first hand - so give Mr. Squib my best for being a good partner to you. And thank you again, for giving my favorite HP couple some peace and joy - their lives are so full of the opposite, that snippets like these are all the sweeter. I just adore that silly, brilliant, bearded wizard and that amazing, black-haired witch.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Thanks. I wanted to include a bit of angst-free fluff for our favorite couple for a change.And you're right: Mr. Squib is a wonderful guy (more Arthur Weasley than Albus Dumbledore, but then I'm probably more Molly than Minerva, so there you go.) I'm glad if the story perks you up a bit; that's often the point of reading fiction, I guess.There is healthy love out there--not perfect, of course, nothing is, but good and positive. I hope you find some outside of fiction, my dear.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Bah - no need looking - much easier to find it here in fanfiction... and much, much safer.And I like Arthur - really admired him for not being threatened by his extreamly dominant wife - in fact, he loves her all the more for her intensity. Not many men like that out there.(P.S. - though I hate to admit it, I am far more like Molly than anyone else in the movie - though if I didn't have kids, I think I'd be more like Alastor - which might be a bad thing - becoming a paranoid loon. My kids, seriously, keep me sane.)
Interesting concept about the rate of aging being tied to power. Albus' getaway sounds fantastic. I want to go :).
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Thanks. I spent quite a bit of time before I even began this fic trying to figure out how the dickens Albus Dumbledore could be well over one hundred and display the kind of agility (mental and physical) he does in the canon, while other canon characters are described as aging much like Muggles do.I want to go to Skye, too!
*sighs dreamily* Oh... how I wish I was going... *mumbles* Do you think Minerva would mind terribly if I made some Minerva Polyjuice and quaffed it all weekend to spend time with her Beau in beautiful Scotland?This was so relaxing to read.... a very peaceful chapter - quite a change from the last many - with all the intensity of the war and distance between these two - this one was just so... calm.And this made me giggle...*snip*It was off-season, so he had his pick of rooms, and he selected one with view of the bay with the Torridon Mountains in the background. It had an en-suite bath and a fireplace, so if the weather were inclement, they could choose to stay in the room and . . . read. Read..... my arse...
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*Minerva was delighted at the suggestion they spend a weekend away, but he quickly discovered that she wasn't especially keen on surprises."You'll just have to wait and see, my love," he said the third time she tried to wheedle their destination out of him."If I don't know where we're going," she asked, "how will I know what to wear? What to bring?""Bring warm, comfortable clothes and good walking shoes. But you needn't bother with a nightdress. I promise to keep you sufficiently warm in bed," he said, putting his arms around her waist, pulling her to him, and kissing her neck.That was particularly cute... Minerva trying to get information out of him and him, as usual, being coy and evasive... that's our Albus! I also loved that you explained magical aging - or rather, your version of how magic folk age - as well as you gave Minerva something she was better at than Albus - which we don't see very often - as Albus excells at everything - here, at least, Minerva can reign supreme on a broom - as well as animagi.Very relaxing and wonderful read - thank you for being so devoted to this piece!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
I'm so glad you found the chapter a pleasant read. I thought they (and you) deserved a little fluff for a change.Yes, I'm sending them on a holiday I would like to take! This is where I envision them going.
*snip*He did often wonder, though, whose shadow had been between himself and Minerva.About ten minutes into her visit, they were interrupted by the arrival of Albus Dumbledore. After a few minutes of pleasant chit-chat, Minerva excused herself to allow the two men to talk privately.Alastor's ears pricked up when Dumbledore told her, "We'll only be a few minutes. If you'll wait for me, I have a few things to discuss with you, Minerva, and it might be pleasanter to do it over tea today than in my office tomorrow. If you're free, that is."That is a particularly good description of the former relationship between Alastor and Minerva (sulks because hers wasn't the first) and a smooth transition to show exactly what that shadow was... and brilliant describing the tuned senses Alastor has, that he can pick up something as subtle as what Albus and Minerva are really saying... Brilliant!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*"Oh, I will, Professor," replied the young man. "Better not keep Minerva waiting," he added with a smile that didn't quite reach his remaining eye.That line shows me that Alastor now knows the answer to his question... and the way you show this is so perfect - subtle hints are your thing - and that smile not reaching his eye shows just how much he regrets Minerva's love for another man - for Dumbledore.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*Albus wanted to keep his life—what he thought of as his solemn obligation—fighting the Dark entirely separate from his other life, the one he had made at Hogwarts, and that included teaching and Minerva and everything else that was good, but he knew it wasn't possible. All he could do was fight this new threat as best he could and hope he could keep Minerva out of it. If he couldn't . . . well, he supposed he'd burn that bridge when he came to it. For the moment, he just wanted to be lost in her for as long as circumstances—and Minerva herself—would allow it.*sniff* That's so sad.... but also, I'm starting to see a pattern - Albus is terribly afraid of commitment - I think he's terrified to love her - and keeps trying to destroy or derail his love FOR her...
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
I'm glad Alastor's perceptiveness came through. We hear in canon what a great Auror he was, but we never get to see what made him so, so I wanted to put just a bit of that in this story. He's such a wonderful character--and I can't wait to see what you do with him!Oh, poor Albus. He carries the weight of the world on his broad shoulders. I guess it doesn't leave him much room to enjoy life. I think he'll get better at it, though, with a bit of help from Minerva.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
OH - one more thing - BRILLIANT explanation on where Albus got his scar and Minerva labeling it - the London Underground - that was really cute!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Glad you liked the scar. To tell the truth, I'd been planning on incorporating that bit since the very beginning of the fic. It just fit here, so I'm glad I got it in.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*cheers*!
"Ta, Auror Bones."*snip*LOLOLOLOL - I loved, loved, LOVED that exchange! Your grandmother! - That was the Alastor I know! Good, great and even better, awesome exchange - especially the wee snip we get of Alastor being humble.... rare glimpse that... and I loved Amelia in this, really did - she was awesomesauce!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Thanks. I love writing Amelia, and doing a scene between her and Alastor was a blast. I'm hoping to do a bit more with their friendship--if not in this fic (it might not fit), then in a stand-alone.Yes, Alastor slipped up. Unusual for him, I think, but there you have it. He's a tough fellow, though, and a sharp one, so I think he'll land on his feet.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Of COURSE he'll land on his FEET! *snorts* That's our Alastor! Super Moody! He needs a cape!
Poor Albus and Minerva, there is always some obstacle keeping them from being openly together. Glad they've started their relationship again anyway.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Well, blame JKR, not me, LOL!It took them a while, didn't it?
*snip*"Never mind. As Headmaster, I must applaud your devotion to the education of our students," he said. "But as a man . . . " He took her in his arms and kissed her.When they broke, he said, "Stop by after, if you're not too tired. We'll have a nightcap and I'll see you to the Apparition point."Two hours later, they stood just at the door leading from Albus' quarters to his office, kissing like a pair of their teenaged charges, Minerva's arms around Albus' neck, his hands at her waist.Gods, it felt good! She had to make a conscious effort to keep from moaning into his mouth, and she was fairly certain, from the way he was holding her scrupulously away from his body, that he had a raging erection. Going slowly had sounded all very well and good, but it was turning out to be exquisite torture. They had had dinner once and played chess on the two previous Saturdays since their first official "date", and each occasion had been punctuated by kisses of increasing ardour at the end, just before he walked her to the Apparition point.These encounters had left her aching for more. It had been almost two years since she had been to bed with anyone, and her body was now making her acutely aware of its having been so cruelly neglected. But she held firm to her promise to herself not to push him. If he was not ready to make love, she would content herself with cool baths and her own fingers.OH, I just love that... love that, love how Albus is opening himself up to her, and love how in control (of herself) Minerva is.And I love the way Minerva handled the Slytherin bullies!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I also love the interaction Minerva had with Slughorn - I think you do a marvelous job describing the Slytherin Head of House and make him human with his small confidence to Minerva - and its cute that he has a wee crush on our Transfiguration professor - I really, really enjoyed that. I also enjoyed that Minerva, though she's not wild about him, is kind and considerate of him. That shows her compassion, which is good to see since she's such a severe and intense person, generally.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
You know I adore Albus Dumbledore - always have, always will, that said, I do like how you illustrate the way he can manipulate people - though for the better, true, but its subtle and you offer it up in a very realistic way - I still wish he didn't manipulate people intentionally, but as intelligent as he is, we know this doesn't fall below his sight, or understanding - and even if I don't particularly like it, I like the way you describe it - subtle but there - and his very considerable talent for it.
*grins* I knew Albus had a set somewhere....
And great to see the Flamels again!
I'm really enjoying your story. I love the historical context that you've set the whole thing in. It's a wonderful tale!
*snip*Never once had he imagined his friend actually seducing his student.Now that's a completely different angle... (see, I watched the whole thing transpire and I would never have imagined that Albus could even consider that he seduced his student - odd that he'd see it that way)...coupled with Filius' understanding that Albus seemed to be self torturing by going after women that would not love him back - gives me a completely different view of our adored Albus. He's punishing himself... funny, I know someone who seems to do that...
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
I do love to insert some 3rd-party POVs at odd points.I think Filius, as a teacher himself, and around Albus' age, would have to see any sexual relationship between Albus and a student as a seduction on his part--or at least a terrible abuse of power.Yes, Albus is self-flagellating. We'll find out why in the next chapter or two.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I can't wait to see... hopefully it will allow Albus to let some of it go, and heal... I hope!
*snip*"Coward," she remarked, turning her attention back to the chessboard. "King to D-seven." The black king advanced on the white queen, drawing his sword. The white queen knelt so he could strike her head cleanly from her shoulders, which he did forcefully, sending the head sailing across the board to land with a clack on the floor."That was uncalled for," said Albus mildly, although nobody was certain if he was speaking to Minerva or her king. "Bishop to F-five. Filius, would you mind retrieving that head? Double check, by the way."I just love their banter - you write this so brilliantly... I have to be envious - its not a sin if I admit it, is it? No... its not... *nods* and I am... terribly... because you're the queen of Albus/Minerva banter - but here's the kicker... during this whole scenario - after Filius enters, I see Albus eating pistachios while he's saying all this, nonchalantly (sp?) shelling and eating pistachios.... were you eating pistachios when you wrote this? Because this is an absolutely CLEAR image in my head here...
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
I do love banter. I couldn't write (or have) a relationship without some.I hadn't considered the pistachios, but it certainly could work.
*snip*"It's fine, Filius. Minerva and I were just having a game of chess. You're just in time to see her take my queen," Albus said with a mischievous wink at his opponent, who practiced her annoyed glare on him.Filius went over to the table, Levitating himself so he could have a better view of the chessboard."I am amazed every time I see you do that, Filius," said Minerva with admiration. "I would never be able to keep myself steady.""Years and years of practice, Minerva," answered Filius. After studying the board a moment, he gave a slight chuckle. "So you are . . ."*snorts and grins* Not sure if I love the wink, the glare or the levitation best... but all three together just makes me glow! (the dragons are just because I love dragons - tee)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*Albus gave a mirthless laugh. "Dishonour. I have gone far past dishonour, my friend."Filius was acutely uncomfortable, but he willed himself to speak. "Do you want to tell me about it, Albus?"Woah! That little man has some minerals! DAMN! I am glad that Albus didn't even attempt to lie... tired of his lies, though quiet they are... so tired of it... glad he didn't, glad he at least, respects Filius.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*What he did say, finally, was that, whatever had happened between them in the past, they had to live in the present, and that Albus deserved a bit of happiness, whatever mistakes he had made. He was fairly certain he still believed that."Do I?" Albus had asked sharply."Of course. So does she.""She does. I just don't think I can give it to her," Albus had said."Why don't you let her determine that? I adore that wee, little wizard.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*Finally, Minerva said irritably, "If you're so keen on research, Einar, why don't you do some yourself?" She crooned at the baby, "Your daddie's being a right prat . . . yes he is . . ." Morrigan gave a happy squeal at her aunt's observation.SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe I LOVE this image of Minerva - your Minerva, the hard, calous, calculating, guarded and severe Minerva is all gooey over her niece - and rightly so! *grins* I just love that!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
Glad you liked these moments.I see Filius as a brave character, but one who prefers to pick his battles. That's why he ended up in Ravenclaw rather than Gryffindor in the end. He cares a lot about Albus, so he's motivated to speak up about what he sees.I enjoy putting a little sister-brother banter into the story. They sort of revert to adolescents around one another.
*snip*"Queen to F-three." When her black queen drew her sword and plunged it through the flank of the hapless white knight's mount, Minerva saw the ghost of a smile pass Albus' lips. "You need to watch that," she said, looking back at the chessboard."What?" he asked."Your chess face. You smiled at my last move, which leads me to believe you're up to something."He said, "How do you know my smile was not due to the brilliance of your own move? I am now threatened on either side.""Because if it had been at my brilliant move, you wouldn't have tried to hide it," she answered."Ah. You are entirely too clever, my dear. Rook to E-seven. Check."Brilliant.... as usual... completely brilliant... and may I clarify - brilliant the way you write these two. Though, Minerva is particularly brilliant here, as usual in Epith.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*Author's Note: The book chapter Einar refers to in this chapter is: McGonagall, M. S., and Franklin, R. E., "At the Crossroads: The Interaction of Magical and Muggle Science in the 20th Century" in: A Common Destiny: The Future of Magical and Muggle Relations, T. D. McGonagall, ed., London: Diagon Press, 1955.Well damn woman, aren't you thorough!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Epithalamium)
I can't help it. I love footnotes.