Perfect III: Complete
darklotus2 Reviews | 10.0/10 (2 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Ron knew he'd made a terrible mistake moments after he stalked out of the wards in a fit of rage. Ron Weasley's search for redemption. Third story set in the "Perfect" universe. This world is not a happy place. Warnings: Dark, AU, Mention of violence (not graphic)
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darklotus
Member Since 2010 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 30 Reviews Written | 15 Review Responses
I've been an avid reader of HP fan fiction for just over a year now, and a Potterhead for much, much longer.
I write original fiction, lyrics and poetry, but I'd never written any fan fiction until now. I'm finding I'm enjoying it immensely.
So far, I've written dark AU, but once I get some of that out of my system, I'd like to try a few other genres.
You never know...
Feel free to friend me on my LJ - where I blather, have fun and do lots of silly things! My fanfiction.net name is darklotus1211, and darklotus on GE and PA
Reviews for Perfect III: Complete
Powerfully written, and, may I add, rather creepy? BTW, I agree with Laurie in that you've made Ron, for once, kinda intriguing.Or could it be the addition of Salazar, who I've always found fascinating? Well done!
Response from darklotus (Author of Perfect III: Complete)
Thanks so much, and you certainly may add rather creepy! I'm quite thrilled you think it is. I've always thought Salazar a fascinating character, and I'm chuffed you found Ron intriguing in this.I put this off for a while, as I was worried I wouldn't be able to achieve a decent treatment of Ron's character , but the call of Salazar was too strong to resist, and wouldn't leave me alone until I succumbed. Reviews like yours make me glad I finally did. It's very much appreciated!DL xxx
Such a fascinating situation you paint here. You have made Ron compelling and intriguing - a rare feat as far as I'm concerned!I don't know what you mean by gobbledegook! You write so poetically and hypnotically - it was a shame to have to rein in some of that by constricting it with tedious grammatical convention. Writers succeed because they communicate their thought processes effectively with their audience, not because they have followed a strict canon of grammatical doctrine.You have created something here which is quite unique. The introduction of Slytherin's influence is fascinating and I really hope for more like it. Brava!!!
Response from darklotus (Author of Perfect III: Complete)
Oh, my dear, dear laurie...I'm so touched, I'm almost speechless, and teary eyed (I know, I'm a big sook) by your kind, kind words!I can't even begin to tell you how much your encouragement , support and friendship means to me... You, my dear, are a true gem, and I think myself lucky beyond belief to have found you!Love you to pieces!DL xxxxxxxxxxx
Response from laurielove (Reviewer)
Bless you - however that may work ...And ... ditto. You've got me all teary-eyed too. 
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