Perfect II: Bliss

darklotus

3 Reviews | 6.67/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Alternate Universe Snapshot Azkaban Prison 674 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Bellatrix Lestrange Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Victory was theirs! Bellatrix was ecstatic.

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Chapter 1: Perfect II: Bliss

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darklotus

Member Since 2010 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 30 Reviews Written | 15 Review Responses

I've been an avid reader of HP fan fiction for just over a year now, and a Potterhead for much, much longer.

I write original fiction, lyrics and poetry, but I'd never written any fan fiction until now. I'm finding I'm enjoying it immensely.
So far, I've written dark AU, but once I get some of that out of my system, I'd like to try a few other genres.
You never know...

Feel free to friend me on my LJ - where I blather, have fun and do lots of silly things! My fanfiction.net name is darklotus1211, and darklotus on GE and PA

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10/10

laurielove

I love the way you have portrayed Bellatrix. And Voldemort. I love his oddly dichotomous nature - it is fascinating to see him smile, and a genuine smile as well, even if it is not entirely meant for her. Another little gem! x

Response from darklotus (Author of Perfect II: Bliss)

Thank you so very much, my dear laurie. If it hadn't been for your support and encouragement, I wouldn't have posted here at all. I'm so glad you like it.mmwaa! DL xxxx

10/10

HBAR

It's funny how the words I'm reading speak of the unthinkable-a victory for Voldemort- and yet while reading it, I feel satisfied and giddy, all because it is from Bella's twisted perspective. I mean, you have me thinking, "Yay, we did it! Wait ... what?" You paint a beautiful picture here, even if she is disgustingly evil. Well done. Just think how great you'll be when you start writing happy stuff *is ridiculously obvious in my effort to influence you*

Response from darklotus (Author of Perfect II: Bliss)

Thank you so much! You have no idea how complimentary it is that you could feel celebratory while reading Bellatrix's "victory tour"! I'm hoping to do something much more light-hearted once I get all this dark stuff out, but, at the moment, that's what's coming - and you can't argue with the muse!

0/10

moiramountain

Creeeeeepy - and very evocative. Can see it, smell it, taste it.... a perfect scene of terrible, dark, manic victory.

Response from darklotus (Author of Perfect II: Bliss)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it worked for you - she's a lot of fun to write. She may be a nutter, but she's so passionate...and creepy. I'm glad the sense of dark exultation I tried for worked.

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