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Pyttan
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I like to read, and I have this compulsion to write.
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Shiver! Very well done. ?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you!
I read this piece...left...then returned and read it again. It was as memorable the second time around. That round definitely went to Severus.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you, I'm flattered that you found it memorable enough to reread. And yes it did.
NICE! Love it!!!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you for telling me and I'm glad you do!
Fascinating look into an interaction between V and SS, and some insight into other characters. I really wonder whether those images are true. Thank you very much for a thought-provoking story.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad I gave you food for thought.
Oooo, creepy. Poor Tedious One, a little sad because he didn't have a personal relationship that could be used in such a way. Typical that the TO doesn't realize that he should watch his own back.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you! Creepy was one of the things I was aming for.He creeps me out so much in the books, and nothing pleased me more than the fact that Severus did fool him, and did so to the bitter end. This is a bit of a homage to that.
You leave us with that perfect state of questioning - did Voldy see reality or only what Severus intended him to see... There was a surgical clarity in this - you indeed cut right to the heart of the matter - and yes, in this case, the pun is intended. I'm so pleased to see you posting more and more !
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you, dear! I'm so glad you see what I was aiming for with this. I'm happy you liked this even if it is on the dark side of things. And the surgical clarity comment ... I just might frame that, since I think it is such a fantastic compliment.
Love your precise categorisation of all the characters, setting immediately the mind-sets and atmosphere; such precise and powerful images... Jealous Voldy - HA! and the wonderful final moment with our smug & superior Severus. Really well-done!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Open-minded)
Thank you Nagandsev! I'm so glad you liked it. I love your reviews since you always offer concrit.