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Hiding In Plain Sight
mayfly11 Reviews | 4.55/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Can a love remain hidden? Do the interfering women of the family always know best? (Neville/Draco)
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Well. You go Neville!
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Hehe, our Neville has hidden depths!
Loved the dialogue between Gran and Narcissa. Well done!
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Thank you!
Ah indeed - I think I'll do exactly that !!! Hurrah !!
Whatever happened to your Draco / Neville stories? I do wish you'd continue !! At first it seems the oddest pairing but you handle the idea with such kindness and gentle humor that it seems possible.
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Sorry about that! I have actually finished this story, as well as all my others. It just is a very difficult process getting a story past the strict mods on this site and RL has been a bitch lately not giving me the time to do it. You could always ckeck out my fic masterlist on LJ if you want.http://mayfly-78.livejournal.com/48277.html#cutid1
Wow this is so sweet. I love it. I never really pictured Draco and Neville together but I can picture it.Signed,
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and gave Draco/Neville chance.
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
So glad that love wins out over pride and duty! Could we have a wee epilogue where Asteria is happy too? It's a bit much for the poor girl to find out so publically...
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
In my fics love always wins! As for poor Asteria, my headcanon is that she meets a charming quiet slytherin by the name of Theo Nott at the Yule Party who proves to be a great aid in helping her over Draco. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Ah, very good - I like everyone to end up happy, ya know?
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
In my fics love always wins! As for poor Asteria, my headcanon is that she meets a charming quiet slytherin by the name of Theo Nott at the Yule Party who proves to be a great aid in helping her over Draco. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Ah, very good - I like everyone to end up happy, ya know?
For a minute there I thought you might give us a sad angsty ending, but Draco came through! yay! :)
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Angsty ending, me? Never! I am rather pleased I managed to almost fool you though... Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Angsty ending, me? Never! I am rather pleased I managed to almost fool you though... Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Love Luna in this. :)
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Luna is always the best! I wanted to showcase some of the amazing HP women in this fic.
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Luna is always the best! I wanted to showcase some of the amazing HP women in this fic.
He almost said it... :)
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
It takes more than that to make a slytherin come clean!
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
It takes more than that to make a slytherin come clean!
Love that Gran and Narcissa know exactly what's happening and just want it out in the open. :)
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Beware when the women decide to take matters into their own hands!
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Beware when the women decide to take matters into their own hands!
I adore Luna and her rather straight forward advice. It's also nice to see a more pleasant Draco.
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Thank you for reading and commenting! I always think of Luna as a cut-to-the-chase kind of girl, and there had to be a nicer side to Draco, or else Neville wouldn't be in love with him.
Response from mayfly (Author of Hiding In Plain Sight)
Thank you for reading and commenting! I always think of Luna as a cut-to-the-chase kind of girl, and there had to be a nicer side to Draco, or else Neville wouldn't be in love with him.