Well I am rarely a Snarry fan but I found myself enjoying every minute of this.  I think part of what worked so well for me was that I always think that these two would only hook up in an extreme circumstance.  You certainly have such a thing here.  This was clever, funny, and sweet all at once.  When I thought they might be stuck there, I wavered between extending my sympathies and feeling complete envy.  And who knew Death was such a quirky fellow?

omg, best story ever!

i love death

and will there be a sequel with the apple?

I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed this.  Bravo. 

An interesting vision of paradise, you have created here.

And Lily as the snake ...

I didn't think anything could get me on the Snarry ship, but this has me strolling up the gangway. Excellent work.

Paradise perhaps, but they'd get bored after a while.  Just as well they came back, although it may be exciting times until the hotheads get over their new-found relationship.  Death, capital D,  reminded me of Brad Pitt in Meet Joe Black! :)

this was sweet and funny, well done

This. Was. BRILLIANT.  I like it almost as much as chocolate.  I know, crazy, right?

Go, you!!!

What a wonderful vision of paradise. I like the idea that Harry saves Severus, just in the nick of time, saving him from death (little d), but leaving Death in a quandary.