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Birthday Laments

morgaine_dulac

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Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 531 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Name Withheld (surprise) Severus Snape

On a cold January morning, she takes farewell of Severus Snape.

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Chapter 1: Birthday Laments

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morgaine_dulac

Member Since 2008 | 52 Stories | Favorited by 122 | 948 Reviews Written | 2,443 Review Responses

Born: in the glorious year of 1979, when Dio joined Black Sabbath and Peter Pettigrew started passing on information to the Dark Lord

Colours: black, green, silver

Passions: writing, cooking, baking, witchcraft

Obsessions: quite a few, chocolate for one (hi Lupin!), but mainly a certain Potions master and a blond DE.

When I am not writing alone, I co-write with my favourite Ravenclaw star_girl. Look for sevs_starsisters to find our stories.

Published writer since 2014. Original fiction is good fun, but I find myself returning to fan fiction every now and then

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Reviews for Birthday Laments

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10/10

loreen77

Emotional. Raw and sad. But beautiful. Well done.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

Huh, from a dark period, that one.

0/10

firewall

Wow, that was intense. Personally, I didn't see/feel a romantic aspect to the relationship and liked the ambiguity of the female character. As I was reading I was vacillating between Minerva and Poppy. Thanks for sharing.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

You're right. Severus and the mystery woman could just have been friends. One doesn't know. Thus, both Minerva and Poppy are good candidates for the part. I'm very glad you liked my little story. Thanks for letting me know.

10/10

mick42

At least he knew some love and kindness in his life, thank you so much for this lovely ,if sad, story. P.S. In my mind, I see Minerva.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

I've always been a little bit afraid of this piece. It's just a tad too dark and was written on a very dark night. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

I did not find it dark so much as sad, He was loved and he knew it, that is so much better then canon.

10/10

MayavanavihariniHarini

That was powerful and intense. I like the fact that she can be anyone. Even me ;)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

Huhhhh... wrote this in one of my darker hours. Not sure I want to re-read it.

10/10

MrsAstoriaMalfoy

Beautiful!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

*hands over a handkerchief*

10/10

Jinxie

Very beautiful. I like the anonymity of the woman. You allow us, the readers to make her anyone we want her to be. Thank you for sharing!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

And thank YOU for reading and letting me know that you liked the little story.

10/10

snitchette

It's very beautiful even if sad. I don't know if you had anyone in mind for her but for me it could be either Minerva or Hermione (with a liking for the latter).

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

Thank you! I am very glad you liked the little piece. See, this is exactly why I didn't give the woman a name. SS/HG does just not do it for me, but as I know that a lot of people like this ship, I'll let them gladly imagine the woman to be Hermione. For me, it's my first OC. In my mind, she will always be the one to have cared the most for Severus.

10/10

debjunk

~Sniff~ That was very poignant and lovely.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

Thanks, hun. *hands over hankie*

0/10

quaffswinegaily

That's really very sad, but absolutely beautiful all the same. Thank you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Birthday Laments)

Thank YOU for reading. Glad you liked it!

0/10

JeneaCapp