Personally, I think you could turn this into a longer fic. There's a lot of exposition and while it's fun -- we all like to hate on Lavender -- it just seems like you could show us a little bit more of what's going on. Thanks for the laughs break! Hermione and Draco's detective agency is a funny idea!

this piece is sparkling with the fun you must have had inventing the potions and twists and turns and writing it down.very funny idea, that the girl is not only getting the fun, but alos the money.then  that Ron of all people find out that something is fishy because his wife redecorates ( he realises THIS?) is to funny, and gets help by his old friends.and the girl finally loses. could almost be called sad. She shold have picked the losers who never get a girl but are rich enough to seperate from a little money.well ok. morally not fine. ok. she had to fall. you were right.

Very cute and funny.. 

Hee hee!  What a lot of fun this story is.  It's like a movie from the 40's.  I wouldn't mind seeing more Granger & Malfoy, always ending with a little wedded bliss for Granger & Krum, but maybe that's just me.

They are so lucky to have themselves as friends. And Lavender definitely deserves what she got.

This was fun! But whose Hermione is she? Who was that mystery voice at the end? Me, myself and I, along with my Rabid Readers, want to know!Warm regards,Fizzabella