Evergreen
moiramountain8 Reviews | 7.5/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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moiramountain
Member Since 2008 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 33 | 329 Reviews Written | 307 Review Responses
A Celtic heart residing in Denver in the shadow of the Rocky Mountains,I've been posting fictions for about a year now and have met some wonderful new friends, including an outstanding beta.
Professionally I'm the Operations Director of a modern dance ensemble, and personally the proud mother of two wonderful daughters.
Those of you who read my works know my passion for the beauty and power of language -- it is my goal to lure the reader into the story -- invoking powerful images, and waking the magic of the tale in their hearts. Much like a potion, I hope to bewitch and ensnare. I VERY MUCH appreicate reviews and critiques. Very helpful to see what my readers are thinking. Currently working on an epic piece and am so happy that so many of you are becoming immersed in it, and are also saying you like my shorter pieces as well. It's an honor to be in the company of some incredible writers - and readers as well !! 
Reviews for Evergreen
Lovely and moving.
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Thank you!! In my mind, I saw this as a pen and ink sketch - I could see the scene so clearly in my head.
Lovely and moving.
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Oh, this breaks my heart - I never saw this review so never answered... and now it's too late to do so. I hope this dear woman knew how much we all treasured her kindness.
Wow, this says so much in so few words. I'm not a drabble fan and I thought this was fantastic.“Perhaps it simply doesn’t know how beautiful it is.”That says it all, really. Nice job.
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
You have gifted me today with such an abundance !! Thank you - I'm doing happy dances! Sometimes I restrict myself to the simplicity and brevity of drabbles because in my WIP I just go on for DAYS! In a world so fixed on physical beauty I wanted to write a small word portrait about what I see as the deeper nature of beauty.
Beautiful and so full of meaning.
“Perhaps it simply doesn’t know how beautiful it is.” I think Severus always saw himself as unlovely, but I've always thought of him beautiful. This is such a lovely piece, Moira.*hugs you* 
Beth
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Thank you Beth! It's wonderful to be posting again. This was a small gift of thanks to my beta - she does so much to keep me sane! I've always considered Severus as having his own primal, dangerous beauty, much like a hawk would have. Indeed, what constitutes beauty?Hugs back to you!!! Moira
Such a lovely little thing, So much said in so few words. Very, very nice indeed.
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Thank you!! Sometimes, as a writer, its fun to play with the concept that less is more -- sometimes /g/...
Naw, how sweet. Perfect last line!
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Just my little observation about what a more perceptive sort of woman might be thinking regarding what is truly beautiful. So glad you enjoyed!
Very touching.
Response from moiramountain (Author of Evergreen)
Thank you - I'm glad this little piece found favor.