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Finding the Right Words
JackieJLH7 Reviews | 7.0/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
He's still not really sure what he's going to say—he's hoping for something better than 'I don't think you're a waste of space,' this time, and he's been thinking about this moment for months, but he's never been all that great with words.
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I never imagined a Dudley Dursley story would make me go awwww ...
This was really well done. Your Arthur is just like I imagine him to be in this situation. And thank goodness for him. The wand man was not going to budge. Makes you wonder if people come in on a regular basis claiming to be related to Harry Potter :)
And then he accidentally gets it right. It seems that it was meant to be.
Oh, by the way, I liked Dudley Dursley, Impromptu Family Reunion. I suppose nothing too wild goes on at the ministry if your badge announces exactly why you are there ;)
What a wonderful story. To try and find the right words and then stumble on them by accident? Serendipity. ^_^
Oh, I like this! Marvelous! You got Arthur spot on, that sort of heady, dotty excitement he gets around Muggles, and the pin was kind of priceless. The trouble with the wand-taking bureaucrat, the nerves before knocking on Harry's door; I loved every inch. Good job.
Aw, nice! Thanks for sharing. I always hoped that Dudley would pull his head out of... wherever... and do the right thing.
That is amazingly...just right. Thanks for a smile to start my day.
a great little fic, really enjoyed it
Aww. I like it!