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The Secret of Hydra

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The Secret of Hydra

RedHH

44 Reviews   |   44 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Alternate Universe Azkaban Prison 16,784 Words 9 Chapters WIP
Bellatrix Lestrange Original Character Severus Snape

Severus and Bellatrix had a single night together. The consequences would last much longer. Slight SS/BL, OFC, AU.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9


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RedHH

Member Since 2009  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 2  |  1 Review Written  |  39 Review Responses

I'm a Canadian university student who reads fanfics when she should be studying instead. I'm always looking for good Snape or Draco stories, so let me know if you come across any awesome (or lesser known) fics! My favourite pairings are HG/SS and HG/DM, although I also enjoy Severitus fics.

I'm currently writing a SS/BL fic called 'The Secret of Hydra,' in which Snape unwittingly searches for the daughter he doesn't know he has. It's being posted both here and at fanfiction.net. Currently on hiatus, but may be picked up again shortly (Aug/Sept 2012-ish).

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10/10

braye27

Bellatrix is really making it hard for her husband to know what's going on, and Severus has now found himself right in the middle of a mystery he might wish he'd never pursued.

Walburga Black is quite the watch-dog, isn't she?  I can understand why she would want to know why someone was traipsing through her house, but she really is paranoid.  LOL!

"The summons was brought to an end when the Dark Lord beckoned for Pettigrew to feed Nagini something that looked suspiciously human-shaped, and the Death Eaters began to drift from the room."  This is just the right bit of gruesome to firmly establish that the Dark Lord is still vicious and still crazy.  He and Bellatrix make a well-matched couple.

Well done, RedHH!

Beth

10/10

braye27

This is an interesting premise.  Snape and Bellatrix having a child is a plot ripe for exploration, so good for you! 

I'm gonna head on over to the next chapter and see just how much trouble Severus can drum up for himself!

Beth

10/10

Red_Garnet

wow. simply- wow. i wonder who she was talking about. and how Snapey will react to this... Great chapter, thanks for the update!

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

You're welcome, and thank YOU for the review! Don't worry, the response is coming...RHH

9/10

Cheezie_Puffz

And she has officially dropped the bomb-oh poor Snape....And I hope she isn't going to be married to the Dark Lord *shudders* Is it wrong I took her description to mean Harry Potter? lol Then I remembered who her mother is...

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Ah, the 'he is very important and will be more so shortly' bit? I never thought about the potential to suggest Harry Potter. But yeah, I definitely can't see Bellatrix offering her child to him; she's not quite THAT unhinged. Thanks for your review!RHH

10/10

mimmom

oooh dear!  Comes the dawn!  Yes, Snape knows now.  Whatever shall he do?!  OMG is she supposed to marry Moldyfart?  AGG.Excellent story so far.  I can't wait to read more.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Oh, the SUSPENSE!!!! You'll just have to read and find out!RHH

0/10

feisanna

Oh!  Hydra....thanks for the update

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

There's a new chapter already in queue, so keep an eye out for it! Thanks for reading,RHH

10/10

mimmom

Poor Hydra! 

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Just wait, you haven't even started feeling sorry for her yet.... Glad you're enjoying it!RHH

10/10

Red_Garnet

omigosh! anywhoo. she seems like a very sweet girl, nothing at all like her parents. i suppose living with mean people only makes you want all the sweetness you can get... either way. great chapter! thanks for the update

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

That's definitely the thought I had in mind when I started writing her character. But I'm hoping that she will also show traits that reflect her parents as well, so let me know if I manage to make that work!RHH

0/10

whynot

Very much enjoying. Glad to see the next chapter is in queue.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Just a heads-up: if you want to read the next chapter, it's already posted on fanfiction.net under my penname RedHH. Glad you're liking it so far!RHH

9/10

reader76

I love how you've described the resemblance of the girl to Snape.  It's certainly clear enough to the reader, but it's not overpowering and isn't detracting from the unfolding story.  I like how gentle she is, and her relationship with Dobby is obviously a great comfort to her. 

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Thank you for your lovely review! Yes, I'm trying to build her characterization rather subtlely, instead of just throwing facts in the reader's face, so I'm glad that it's working! Let me know what you think of the next chapter, when it gets through the vetting process!RHH

10/10

esmelle

Very interesting that it hasn't occurred to Severus that Hydra might be his. I think he is in for a surprise.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Well, I think we all know that Snape is a really smart guy who is blind to certain emotional situations. Trust me, a revelation will occur. Keep me updated on your thoughts!RHH

10/10

Red_Garnet

Cliffhangers. I hate them. OMG! This story is SO awesome! Hahaha poor Snapey doesn't know that he is about to see his own child! Can't wait until you update! Thank you so much for the chapter!

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Haha I'm usually not the best at cliffies, but this one just happened perfectly. Glad you're enjoying it so far, let me know what you think as more chapters go up!RHH

8/10

feisanna

oooo.... exciting.  thanks for the update

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

You're welcome! Glad you're enjoying it so far!RHH

7/10

Cheezie_Puffz

I wonder how Severus will feel about seeing his won child...

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

I guess you'll just have to keep reading.... :)RHH

10/10

esmelle

That was quite a risk Snape took apparating blindly. He could have ended up in front of Bella and Druella and I don't think they would have invited him for tea :). I liked your phrase about waitng for the dark lord being worse than meeting him.... Looking forward to discovering if my theory about the girl and Bella is correct.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Glad you're liking it! Keep me updated on your thoughts as new chapters come up!RHH

10/10

Red_Garnet

Cool! is that Hydra? or am i soo off track? this is an incredibly interesting story. Hope to see more soon! Oh, and FIRST! i just HAD to do that.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

No, you're definitely on the right track! :) I'm glad you like it so far... keep me updated with your thoughts as the story continues!RHH

10/10

Red_Garnet

Cool! Nice story. Seems very interesting. I'll be waiting until the next chapter is up. "Cheers!"

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

Thanks for the review! I hope you'll let me know what you think of it as the story progresses.RHH

10/10

esmelle

If I were the betting type I would guess that Bellatrix had Severus' child. The name Hydra is interesting. Wonder how she came up with that. Looking forward to more.

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

I'll be explaining the significance of the name Hydra in a later chapter, but probably not for a few weeks. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

reader76

Is Draco her intended?  I can see Bellatrix viewing him as the heir apparent.  This is before Dumbledore's murder, right?  Poor Snape, what a way to find out you have a child....

Response from RedHH (Author of The Secret of Hydra)

This is definitely before Dumbledore's murder, and that particular event will be making an appearance further into the story. And I don't think I'll answer that question right now... you'll have to keep reading to find out! There's a new chapter waiting that should be through the queue within a day or so. Thanks for reading, and please continue to let me know what you think!Red

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