Three Haiku
Chapter 1 of 1
peppermintSwimming
slicing through cold
water, I'm an instrument
of Mother Nature.
Twilight
Dusky blue skies
setting sun makes promises
return again soon.
Treat
I am a cookie
lemony, rich in flavor
do not resist me.
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4 Reviews | 7.5/10 Average
I love your poetry, Voxy. The first two are beautiful while the third is laugh-out-loud funny... and true.
The first two are lovely and elegant and the third one made me laugh out loud. As if I *could* resist!
One might say they would be connected if the order were swimming-treat-twilight by the sequence of breaking-the-ice, intimacy, and satiation-with-hope-for-later-repetition. A classic erotic triad.
Response from peppermint (Author of Three Haiku)
I really love your reviews,
Response from peppermint (Author of Three Haiku)
, because you tend to find things that I've completely overlooked :)
:)