Glimpsed Opportunity

4 Reviews | 5.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

General Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 370 Words 1 Chapter Complete

They shared a detention. They might share a future.

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Chapter 1: oneshot

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0/10

I like the way you've shown their differing views of the same event. Well done.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Glimpsed Opportunity)

Thank you! The sad truth of that relationship is that they never quite saw the same thing, I think.

10/10

Damn those crystal balls! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Glimpsed Opportunity)

I know! If only Lily had been prepared to believe it...Thanks for the review!

10/10

Oh how sad, but amazing how two people can look at the same situation and see and feel such different things. Nicely done.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Glimpsed Opportunity)

I know. They could have been so happy, but they never quite managed it. Thank you!

0/10

Oh, that's just so sad. *snif*

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Glimpsed Opportunity)

I know. They were just never quite on the same page, at least in canon. Thanks for the review!

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