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Metamorphosis

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Metamorphosis

Keppiehed

4 Reviews   |   4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Angst Psychological Short Story 1,160 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Dress shopping ends without a surprise for Melinda.

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Chapter 1: Metamorphosis


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10/10

sunny33

It's sad how women in that situation cannot see how they can leave.

Response from Keppiehed (Author of Metamorphosis)

You are so right, and so many readers told me that this was very true for them, which really made me want to cry. For me it was a borrowed glance, and I was glad to be able to put the pen down and walk away, but I am so sad for people who cannot. Thank you for always reading my stuff, even when it isn't very pretty!

10/10

HBAR

Oh, how very sad!  Your title and the analogy that goes with it is so fitting to the situation.  She needs to just walk out the door and never come back.  But that probably won't happen.  Still, I'm feeling optomistic tonight (weird, I know) so I'm thinking that she did have that moment of clarity in the dressing room where she picked the dress that she wanted to get-the one which made her feel feminine and attractive- and purchased it.  It was short lived, but maybe one of these times she will feel so good about herself that she doesn't go home again.  Your thoughts and emotions feel spot on, as always.  Nice job!

Response from Keppiehed (Author of Metamorphosis)

Thanks for tackling a tough one. I know this isn't easy to read, and it must make you cringe to se an original from me, because the stuff is always so tough. I really do appreciate that you take the time to read through something like this. Thank you.(And I just walked through the door. I TOTALLY owe you an e-mail. I just saw this one from you first.) *head spins*

10/10

Anonymous

You know things like this infuriate me. All I will say is that you did fine work as usual, and I wish more women would just learn how to leave.

... or use a gun.

Author's Response: I am sorry that you had to read this. You are so soft-hearted, especially towards women. I should have had a special disclaimer up there just for you! *hugs* I can't thank you enough for always reading all of my stuff. Why is it so dark all the time? Maybe one of these days I'll write some fluffy thing just for you! And not slashy, either! *winks* But really, I am sorry if this crossed a line, and I thank you for being so supportive.

10/10

LoveFenrir

ngh... *tear*melinda, you poor woman =(well written

Response from Keppiehed (Author of Metamorphosis)

This was a difficult subject matter to read (and write!) about. Thank you so much for spending the time on it. It is much appreciated!

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