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Past, Present, Future
mayfly4 Reviews | 2.5/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Draco can’t help remembering the past, and Neville can’t help giving second chances.
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Beautiful story. The progression is lovely as both boys receive healing and find a way to move from the battles into the time afterwards.
Response from mayfly (Author of Past, Present, Future)
Thanks for your kind review. This story is definitely about moving forward and making your peace with the past.
Beautiful. Whatever sort of friendship they go on to have, they've developed a sort of brotherhood between them by allowing themselves to share what they had in common and move from there to the things that are different.
Response from mayfly (Author of Past, Present, Future)
Thank you for your kind words! I was originally going to write a slash story, by the boys decided they wanted to become friends first. It turned out much better like that in the end, I think.
Le sigh. I enjoyed this journey of discovery with Longbottom and Malfoy. I hope you will continue their friendship in later stories as they mature and marry and have children. It's a beautiful and well written piece of work. Thank you. ^_^
Response from mayfly (Author of Past, Present, Future)
I'm happy you enjoyed it! Neville/Draco is one of my favourite pairings, so I will be writting more of them in the future when the muse strikes again. Thank you for your lovely comment.
It appears I have the honor of being the first to review here at Part 2. This is a profoundly moving, and beautifully rendered depiction of these two young men. I am so pleased that you have given Draco his humanity and in so doing, allowed Severus to also have his remembered. And Neville is simply a treausre. This goes into Favorites as we speak !!
Response from mayfly (Author of Past, Present, Future)
Thank you for the lovely review. I'm so glad you liked it. My Draco is very very human for all his faults. And Neville is my kind of hero.