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The Burn
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Wonderful ending - what a zinger - that was really powerful/painful - poor Severus! Draco is such a nasty piece of work - what a little s**t! Sorry about the explicative -- I'm just really worked up after reading this -- again, poor Sev; one other little keepsake/remembrance of happiness taken away from him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Burn)
LOL! I had to get back to Draco's bratty!canon roots after all of the reformed work I've been doing on him over at Princes in Exile. I'm glad it made you want to kick him--I did too. Your review made me smile; thanks so much for taking the time to read it!
Now, Kep, that was just mean! Poor Sev. :P
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Burn)
LOL! I know, I have been busy reforming Draco over at Princes in Exile, so I thought it was time for him to get back to his bratty canon roots. If I'd had some more words available, I think Sev would have put him right back in his place, though, never you fear. ;) Thanks for reading it!
He should have said that he confiscated it from a firstie. And I'm surprised he doesn't say a thing to Draco for messing in his drawer unauthorized.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Burn)
LOL! You're right. I was over word count by 150 words, so it was a struggle to even get what I had whittled down. If I'd had more time, you may be sure that Snape would have opened a can of whup-ass on Draco ... in his own delightfully understated way, of course! Thanks for reading!
Anonymous
Oh fuck!
That calls for some sort of twisted revenge!
Good job, Keppie!
Author's Response: *laughs* Why, thank you much, Sir!
Ok, in a student/teacher relationship, Draco probably hasn't done anything that is worth more than a loss of house points. But as his Godfather, doesnt he have the right to kick Draco's ass for being mouthy, and snoopy, and burning his irreplaceable picture. He needs to take off his belt and bend that boy over his knee for a good old fashioned muggle spanking. That is really sad about his picture. But, maybe now he'll move on and find someone else *whistles innocently* This version of Draco is a bit whiny for my taste, but I think that is true to his character. I just prefer him a little more grown up ;) Nicely done.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Burn)
You have my permission to write the sequel, in which Snape bends Draco over his knee. I knew I'd turn you to the darkside! *is delighted*And I think you are just accustomed to a certain PIE Draco. That's the high-bar now. I think I've ruined you for anything else! *is modest* Thanks for taking the time to read it. You know I always look forward to your reviews!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Yeah, I almost put a disclaimer in just for your benefit that I really did mean the spanking in an entirely disciplinary manner. Still... watch what you give permission for ;)Yes, I really can't stand Draco much, but there is a certain something about that PIE boy that has me terribly interested. You have ruined me for any other version, and I'm not at all disappointed.