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Hogwarts Castle 1-Sep-70
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morgaine_dulac

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Snapshot Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 418 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Severus Snape

Just a little peek into young Severus' diary.

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Chapter 1: 1-Sep-70


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morgaine_dulac

Member Since 2008  |  52 Stories  |  Favorited by 122  |  948 Reviews Written  |  2,443 Review Responses

Born: in the glorious year of 1979, when Dio joined Black Sabbath and Peter Pettigrew started passing on information to the Dark Lord

Colours: black, green, silver

Passions: writing, cooking, baking, witchcraft

Obsessions: quite a few, chocolate for one (hi Lupin!), but mainly a certain Potions master and a blond DE.

When I am not writing alone, I co-write with my favourite Ravenclaw star_girl. Look for sevs_starsisters to find our stories.

Published writer since 2014. Original fiction is good fun, but I find myself returning to fan fiction every now and then 

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Reviews for 1-Sep-70

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10/10

loreen77

Poor Sev. He could never catch a break and be happy. 

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

It's even sadder when you think that he had dreams once, and hope.

0/10

Gemini Sister

Awe, poor Severus. Getting beat up at school is not fun at all but to come home and get beaten up by his own father. Just down right nasty. And his mum not allowed to heal him. Giving the ten year old Sev a great big hug.

Thanks not seen this before.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

I had all but forgotten about this little piece. Is this a sign that I write too much? ;-)

10/10

Crystal Quill

That's a wonderful insight into young Severus! Very well written!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Thank you very much. Just talked with star_girl about you the other day. Only positive things, of course. I'm happy to inform you that we are about to start writing Star Sisters Part 2. :-) Hope to see you there.

Response from Crystal Quill (Reviewer)

Count me in!

0/10

kimjo2

sad.  well done.  thanks

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Thank YOU.

0/10

Memory

Poor little kid. He might have had all the defects in this world, but still he was a child and he deserved love.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Poor little kid, indeed. He had such high hopes, and they were all shattered :(

10/10

sunny33

Oh, the poor wee boy.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Go ahead, give him a hug :-)

10/10

Pennfana

Poor guy.  He's got no idea what's coming to him.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

He had his hopes shattered on the very first day. Just imagine how things could have been different if he hadn't ended up as the Marauder's punch bag. 

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Sad to know his hopes, for a stop to the bullying with a change in school, were not to come to fruition.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

That is sad, indeed. No wonder he ended up with the Death Eaters. They, at least, "accepted" him.

0/10

gurlimargrethe

oh so sad, made a lump in my throat.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Naw, sorry. But yes, Severus' story is a sad one from the very beginning :-(

10/10

mick42

My heart breaks for that little boy.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

*hands over hankie*

10/10

snitchette

I wish the next year would have been better for him. No child should be that miserable.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

Wouldn't it be fun to re-write canon? Make Severus become friends with the Marauders, Lily never pushing him away, ... Oh, the possibilities!

10/10

MrsAstoriaMalfoy

Poor little Sev! If only he knew what was in store for him at Hogwarts!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of 1-Sep-70)

He was young, he had hopes ...

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