Perfect Match
karelia11 Reviews | 7.18/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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karelia
Member Since 2005 | 83 Stories | Favorited by 232 | 666 Reviews Written | 2,343 Review Responses
Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
Reviews for Perfect Match
Yes they are perfect for each other. Very lovely story and glad you're back.
smooth as silk and so beautiful. it is like caressing the skin of the one you love.
Just lovely. You never use an extra word.
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
Thank you. Coming from you, that means a lot! I'm always on the fence over whether it's that or whether it's too scarce. :)
Lovely as usual, my dear. I enjoyed how it wasn't exactly clear who this couple was until the end.
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
Thank you so much. I haven't write much worth posting this year. I wrote lots, but deleted most, and I'm doubly glad that you like it.Fairfield rightly grumbled about my calling her name earlier, but I changed it. *grins* He had a very valid point, I think.
Well, she was a Slytherin too! :)
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
*grins*Of course she was. :D
Oh, I love the poetic feel of this. Your descriptions are lovely. And it stole my breath when they were trying to make it to the hut.Wonderful!
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
Thank you so much!The last two segments about killed me. I rewrote them I don't know how many times, but I've finally managed to write something. <3
Silly Lucius, thinking it was all his idea ;)
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
*grins* Indeed!
Outstanding, not to mention utterly lovely. I was so pleased to read that one of my prompts helped free your Muse... especially since we readers get to enjoy the delightful results. 
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
Aw, thank you!
Of course Narcissa took the time to figure him out first, and of course Lucius feels flattered by it. Wonderful!
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
I didn't think she's the kind to enter a marriage lightly or without giving it great thought. :)Thank you!
A captivating drabble. My only quibble is that there was no need to reveal her name in the next-to-the-last vignette. The suspense could have lasted a few more lines.
Response from karelia (Author of Perfect Match)
Thank you!*Laughs* I hadn't even noticed that I hadn't mentioned either name until then. I like the point you made and have tweaked it. :)