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quaffswinegaily7 Reviews | 7.14/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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EXCELLENT! I've pondered this myself. I wondered if maybe Snape had AS. He certainly has a few traits. Someone recently said to me that I need to protect my son from people as he gets older who will take advantage of him and get him involved in things he doesn't fully understand. Sounds a bit like snape doesn't it?
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
It's a thought, isn't it?
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
It is! It's hard not to include some asperger experiences in creative writing, isn't it? So much a part of my life. I really feel more comfortable with people who have AS, too.Not sure if you're an Alan Rickman fan but have you seen the film Snow Cake. I thought Sigourney Weaver was excellent in the role of a woman with high functioning autism. She reminds me of my son in a few scenes.
I enjoyed a great deal about your story, but just can't reconcile a Severus with Asperger's with the spy of canon who successfully held his cover for so many years -- and with Voldemort himself. The Severus you created is very believable and a character with whom one feels a great deal of sympathy, but he couldn't be a useful spy for Dumbledore. I humbly suggest marking the story AU. I do feel you've done a valuable service in helping to raise people's consciousness about Asperger's and I appreciate your efforts for this. Many people know little about autism spectrum disorders, so getting more information to them is a wonderful thing. Thanks for your work!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
Someone else asked that question. I agree most people with the syndrome, would not cope. A high functioning person with Asperger's may be quite able to work as a spy, so long as they are not required to cover with lies. They may have difficulty with close social interactions, so are quite capable of working as experts in both camps, without feeling concerns about passing on information from either side. Many of the world's best spies fall into this category. They like routine and predicatbility, which makes them almost invisible to many people, though maybe not so great for improvising on on the hop.It's worth a thought.Having a brother with Asperger's gives me a bit of insight into the condition. Thanks for your review
Response from Cerydden M_Layne (Reviewer)
I appreciate your response -- I can tell you truly care about this subject. I care, too, knowing more than one person "on the spectrum" and strongly believing that there are more categories on it which haven't been defined yet. But consider: You even say ".... so long as they are not required to cover with lies." I think Severus would have had to lie through his teeth repeatedly, especially when he appeared before Voldemort after Voldemort's return. He would have had to explain convincingly what he had been doing all those years and "prove" to Voldemort's satisfaction that he was still loyal. As a professor in a school of children, he would have been asked many questions that would have required lies. People like Lucius are certainly very socially adept and would have required a very convincing cover story as well. I grant that people with Asperger's could be spies in certain environments but I just can't see it in this one. I don't want to "argue" with you or have you think that I consider your story fatally flawed; I just think it's AU. I do believe that you have performed a public service in educating people as to the condition -- and in your response to my review as well. Again, thanks for your work!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
I appreciate your input Cerydden. I reckon, a bit of discussion is something to be encouraged, not avoided. It's rewarding to get a bit of feed back.I fully admit, I have trouble sticking to canon, and most things I write are AU with a will of their own.With regard to your own, obvious writing ability, may I ask when we will see something you have written posted here? Your reviews are well considered and well written. I would look forward to reading your own work.Cheers!
Oh, that would explain so very much about him, wouldn't it? I liked this very much.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
It fits, doesn't it? Thanks for your review.
my son has asperger's syndrome and it makes every day an interesting adventure..personal space is a completely foreign concept to him..we are working on idioms at the moment...
thank you for dealing with it so sensitively,and so acurately it made me laugh
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
I understand what you are dealing with. My brother has Asperger's. When someone over 6 foot tall doesn't understand personal space it can be a bit intimidating.Like all life's challenges - it is best approached with love, support and sense of humour.
Thanks for the explanation because I didn't know the Asperger's syndrom. Now that I understand the bottom of it, I love it all the more.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
And does it fit his character?
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Yes, I think it could fit his character.
Actually it might be syphilis - loss of nasal bridge and mental health issues.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Bugger! posted this in the wrong bit - time to go home.
OK. Now go diagnose Voldemort. :P
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
serpentine psychopath with grandiose delusions - easy!
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I'm ringing the Mental Health Team to suggest they send all their tricky ones to you. :D
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
Dr Quick's quaking in his shoes.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of Otto)
Dr Quick's quaking in his shoes.