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Saturday Night Drabbles Natural Predator
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Natural Predator

1: Natural Predator

Natural Predator

ApollinaV

12 Reviews   |   12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Snapshot Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 708 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Lucius Malfoy Original Character Peter Pettigrew

Lucius finds a rat.

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Chapter 1: Natural Predator


About ApollinaV

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ApollinaV

Member Since 2008  |  25 Stories  |  Favorited by 97  |  169 Reviews Written  |  627 Review Responses

Like many proud alumni of the honorable Hufflepuff House, ApollinaV is a rabbid Huffle-hugger, champion pear-tickler, and founding member of Cleansweep-Streakers Guild (the AV-Eyeful is so named in her honor). Since graduating Hogwarts, she done 'responsible' and 'professional' things - and resolves not to do that anymore. Dreadful amounts of paperwork.

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10/10

mick42

Poor Lucius, all this, and he would have to listen to Narcissa BITCH as well.Reginald may not have a body, but has he got fangs? Love it!!!

0/10

kimjo2

brilliant!!!  love the image.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

*big cheesy grins*  Thank you sweetie!  AV

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh, Reginald is just fab! So is Lucius. Will be taking both to bed with me now :)

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

Why thank you!  *sends Lucius and Reginald right over*Enjoy!  AV

10/10

snitchette

I love the whole speaking cane. Reginald is really fun. I hope you plan to developp him a bit.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

The speaking-cane is credited to Christev- that was her prompt, and inspired by the talking parrot handle in Mary Poppins.  But thank you, I liked Reginald too.  He may pop up in future pieces.  AV

0/10

liviconnor

The mesmerizing snake cane reminds me of Jafar's stick from Aladdin.  Poor Lucius, destroying his favourite china just because that icky little rodent got his paws on it.  Now, I love rats.  But Peter Pettigrew?  A pock on the face of rodentkind. I really like your clean-obsessed Lucius- clean blood is no excuse for a dirty household!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

*cackles madly*  That's hilarious - 'clean blood is no excuse for a dirty household' - how scandalous!I agree wholeheartedly - Peter gives vermin a bad name.  Thank you m'dear! AV

10/10

sunny33

I want a Reginald, too! :)

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

*waves magical wand*And so you shall have one my dear.  Just be careful - I hear he gets broomsick.  AV

0/10

Amita

An entertaining interlude.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

Thank you! AV

10/10

MollysSister

Well its about time Reginald got some time speaking in the lime light! Loved it!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

*grins*  Well, he's been waiting to make his debut.  Thank you sweetie!  *schmootches! AV

9/10

moiramountain

It's going to take an army of bloody house-elves to make the place even habitable again..... not to mention giving Narcissa the excuse she's been looking for to re-furnish the drawing room....   the thought of the rat skittering about made even my lip curl in a most Lucius like manner.... There's been lots of lovely darkness lately on the site - but what fun to have some Lucius snark as well !!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

No kidding.  Condemn the building now.Thank you sweetie!  AV

0/10

quaffswinegaily

The talking snake cane is lovely. Can I have one of those?I like your finicky Lucius as well. Can I have him too?

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

*waves magic wand*Voila!  You may have both.  Enjoy m'dear!  AV

0/10

roughcut

Love it. 

Response from ApollinaV (Author of Natural Predator)

I'm so glad to hear that! AV

0/10

TalesOfSnape

Heeee! This is absolutely priceless. Many, many blessings on Christev for giving you such a wonderful prompt and on you for doing so magnificently with it.

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