One of Them
Keppiehed4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
A gift!fic featuring Dark!Snape and Ron. But Voldemort sneaked in there, too, that scene-grabber!
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In a time of war one soldier is often bound to make horrible things. I wish he hadn't that many to do. Because he had to live with the memories days and nights after.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of One of Them)
Arrgh, poor Severus! I know, my heart was breaking for him. They wanted dark!Snape, so I had to deliver it. Hope that you liked it, even though it was a little gruesome!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I liked it but I ached for him for having to do it and for Ron (I can't believe I'm saying this) who knows Snape doesn't have many choice.
How do you do it? Making me empathise with the torturer shows fantastic writing skills. Thanks again for another thought provoking piece.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of One of Them)
oooh! What a lovely review! That just made my ego get huge. You'd btter be careful or I am going to come knocking and ask for your fantastic reviews instead of waiting so patiently until you read them in your own time. There may be ego-stroking spam in your inbox future! LOLThanks, as ever, for making a point to read my stuff. I really do appreciate that you take the time to do so.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
I'm giving you five stars, but I think it goes without saying that it is for your wondersful storytelling skills, and the ability to make us feel strong emotions where your characters are concerned. If I could take away stars, I would do so for content *sticks out tongue at you* Still, I will go easy on you since a gift for someone means you have to give them what they want. Just post something else soon to cleanse the palate :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of One of Them)
I know, I know. I wasn't particularly fond of this one, myself. Not only did I have to make poor Snape so bad, but I didn't even get much enjoyment out of torturing Ron. At least I made him sort of a tragic figure as opposed to pathetic, right?Never fear, I have a dark!Draco/Ron that I have been commissioned that might just manage to delight you. *squicks self*
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
*Hides until dark!everyone goes away* Um, yeah...shouldn't you be packing? *off to find you a community where they ask you to write HP fic with babies, and puppies and rainbows, just to balance you out a bit* Don't mention it, just a friendly gesture on my part :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of One of Them)
Ah, don't worry. I have a fluff Snarry that should make you happy. And box tally now=2. Hooray! Progress! Days until move is 8, but don't mention that. *hair falls out under stress*
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
You'll still be beautiful bald! That having been said, you can't hooray for two boxes this close to the move. Come on soldier, pack, pack, pack! And while you are at it, bring on the fluff. I really need some after a long week!
Ooh. That was dark. I'm turning the lights on now. :0
Response from Keppiehed (Author of One of Them)
I know, poor Dark! Snape! I hated to write it, but there seems to be a big call for that sort of thing. I like the angst myself. Thanks for reading, though!