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Sleeping Draught
JackieJLH8 Reviews | 3.75/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Every year, Professor Slughorn asks his students to make Sleeping Draught. Some students react differently to the assignment than others.
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You know, I don't typically like Slughorn as a character, he always seems too self-serving, however I like how you've portrayed him even in this little drabble. Kudos, for being able to change my thoughts on the man in so few words. :)
Wow, NICE!
Oh, wonderful! I loved the similarities and the contrats between the two drabble sets. :D
So well done!
Ooo... Interesting contrast. I have to admit, seeing Parvarti get scolded, but only initially, because her desperate measures in the face of such horror, makes Regulus look even more like a whiny baby. I was more kindly inclined toward him to start with, but not after considering Parvarti's situation.
I liked the way you involved less obvious characters. The different dynamics between the different sets of siblings was well portrayed.
Brilliant story with a great plot, I actually liked your Slughorn at the end here, and he aint usually a man I care much about. Subtle and brilliantly told!
That's very good. Similar situations, but also completely different. :)
Beautiful contrast here, very well done. Regulus seems rather whiny, but I imagine Sirius' ability to not work would get irritating very quickly.