New Chapter for Dudley's Punishment
Dudley's Punishment
Keppiehed7 Reviews | 5.71/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Dudley gets what's coming to him. It just isn't what he thinks it's
going to be ...
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I love what you've done with this prompt. The PJs are quite special. Thank you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
Well, thanks! It was more fun than I thought it would be. Maybe you should prompt me more often!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Don't tempt me. You know what happens when sunny and I get our heads together.
Oh me, oh my! You had me worried, and... well, it's still a weird fic, but not nearly so weird as it could have been. I'm almost disappointed, but also quite relieved.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
Well, I'm not sure what to make of your review. *ponders* I suppose I must puzzle it out to mean that you are requesting more action between Dudley and Draco? *grins wickedly* I shall endeavor to provide it in the future. Just remember this moment, when you asked for it! *laughs*Thanks, as always, for reading it!
Response from liviconnor (Reviewer)
I'm not really longing for more Dudley/Draco action, but I am kind of curious to see where it would go. The image of a naked Dudley is pretty horrifying, and I'm kicking myself for even thinking about it, but the curiosity is there. If you do go down that pathetic, jiggly road, I'll be sure to remember my own part in the mayhem that follows.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
I think my work here is done, when I have planted the seed of wonder for a naked Dudley! *pats self on back*You can always go check out the DudleyRedeemed fest, if you REALLY want to get your Dudley groove on. And maybe this isn't the last you've seen of that poor fellow after all! ;)
Response from liviconnor (Reviewer)
Urk.
Bwahaha. Very good. Love the pajamas... completely different to what I expected! And Dudley thinking Draco has a medical condition... priceless! :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
I'm glad that you are pleased! This ended up being strange, but a lot of fun! I had no idea when I started writing it tat they would interact the way they did. So I'm glad I could surprise us both! Thanks for reading, I am glad you enjoyed it.
*smile* I must confess I was a little bit afraid because after Ron and Sybill I feared about reading Draco/Dudley. I4m glad it is very pleasant and not nightmares provider.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
I feel like I am torturing you! *laughs* I think I am the only author here that makes people cringe before they click on the story, never sure quite what they are going to get! That tickles my funnybone. It also goes to show that I am lowering your poor standars, because anywhere else, I think you wouldn't be able to read a Dudley/Draco and come out of it saying it is "very pleasant"! I'm glad that this one left a better taste on your palate. It was actually rather fun to write. Thank you, my dear, for giving it a try, even if I sometimes leave you a trick instead of a treat!
Well I would be peeved too if I was awoken from my fantasy dream of... um, pancakes? I liked the dynamic between Draco and Dudley, and the fact that Dudley pities Draco for his looks was priceless. Dudley is lucky that Harry arrives in time to save the day, but I would have liked to have seen what would have trasnpired had he not. And yeah Dudley, go ahead and go back to sleep. After that little scene, there is no way your dreams will be about pancakes! Thanks for the laugh.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
I thought you might appreciate that I didn't sully your dear Ron in this, nor did I drag your precious Harry through the mud. It was relatively tame, as far as these things go. Ah, I must be settling into my old age! Honestly, I have never written Dudley before, and the mix of him and Draco was too disconcerting. I'm glad it came off okay. They are a strange pair. I know what I had in mind should Harry not have shown up in time, but I am curious what people think would have transpired. Ah, best left to the individual imagination. Mine is rife with naughty ideas!I'm glad you liked this! It was fun to write!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Yes I was gleeful on the Ron and Harry front. I mean honestly, I let you have free reign with any other character. Draco did say he would see Dudley at Christmas *points out opening for a sequel* Maybe Dudley steps outs of line again, and this time Harry is nowhere in sight...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
You will never convince me that your inner author is not straining to break free. Let that muse out! She wants to write smutty goodness in the worst way, I can just tell! And what a wonderful debut: A Dudley/Draco Chrismas Pudding. You know you want to! I say: give it a go!*smothers giggles*
Anonymous
LOL!!
That was fantastic! Funny and clever!
What fabulous situation Dudley D. Moron found himself in!
Author's Response: LOL! This was my first Dudley, so I had a little fun with the poor guy. I have to say, these lighter pieces are a bit more fun. I think they re-charge my batteries a bit!
Thanks for reading, like always, Edge!
Hilarious! The perfect punishment. Good going!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Dudley's Punishment)
I'm so glad you enjoyed. This was my first Dudley, and I didn't know how he and Draco would do together. It was more fun than I expected! Thanks so much for reading it!