The building tension and, possibly, understanding between Ginny and Draco is great.

This is an excellent work. Your writing is beautifully sparse, telling a much longer story in a few, efficient words. I liked the way you kept the focus on the characters thoughts and feelings, and didn't weigh them down with needless description or exposition. The flying metaphor was perfectly laced throughout the story, and the perfect metaphor for these two characters. Your Draco and Ginny felt like real people, more "fleshed-out" than their canon versions. Well done!

-C