New Chapter for The Payback
The Payback
Keppiehed5 Reviews | 6.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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Keppiehed
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This story was well written and keep writing more to this story PLEASE! I LOVED IT ALOT! :)It was steamly HOT. It got me all hot wondering if Draco was going to kill Harry possibly!KEEp Writing, I loved it LOADS!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! That really perked me up to hear that this morning. Alas, I must disappoint you. I am known for my terrible lack of sequels. I just don't have it in me, though several people have done me the honor of writing them to my stories, and should the bug bite you and you feel you want to continue the story on your own, I certainly give you permission. I just can never do it. But thanks so much for the lovely review, I really appreciate it!
Response from DracoSlut69 (Reviewer)
Thanks for this opportunity to continue and further this story. I promise as a writer to another writer that I won't diappoint you. You have awesome stories and I wish to help those other ones. In the future I hope to make help you with other stories you may write up. I hope this dosen't sound pushy to you. I just love writing too. Let me know, PLEASE! Again, Thanks for the opportunity and chance. You have a good days ahead of you. THANKS! :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
It isn't pushy at all. Your enthusiasm is very flattering, and if my story can help insprie you to write something of your own, then you are welcome to it. This is fanfiction, after all, where we got our inspiration from someone else's work. So, you may feel free to continue on my idea if you are so inclined. I would love it if you send me a link so that I can see what you did with it, whenever you get aorund to it, as I am always interested to see where people's imaginations take them. And thatnks again for reading, I always appreciate that someone likes my stuff!
Response from DracoSlut69 (Reviewer)
It just when I read stories from authors I just want so much more to it. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH! This means a great deal to me. I still promise not to disappoint you with the continued story that picks up where you left off. THANKS! :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
You should go read "Princes in Exile". Not to pimp my own stuff, but after a little bit of a slow start, that is a REALLY good story. If you don't mind waiting a bit to get to the smut, I can promise you a fantastic read!
Response from DracoSlut69 (Reviewer)
Oh, i will read it. Like right now. I love any story. Thanks again! :)
Really if Harry wished it really hard I'm sure he could get out of it all. My guess is he was enjoying this a lot. And maybe from now on he'll want to do it again... *grin*
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
I think you are right about Harry enjoying it more than he let on... I have to give credit to my co-author for most of this one. I couldn't seem to bring the right level of smut to this, so she helped steam it up for me. Glad you enjoyed the join effort! Thanks for your reviews, I always look forward to them!
Anonymous
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*Gak*
o_O
*cough*
Okay, that's it. I'm done for today. Not only have you silenced the one Muse who was willing to talk to me today, you've single-handedly made me sick.
God that was awful! Brutal! Bestial!
Hmmm ...
"You're my prison bitch
my prison bitch you're not like other men
I'm glad we share a prison cell when lights go out at ten
I can't escape the way I feel now that will be a crime
as long as I am doing you I don't mind doing time!
'cause you're my
prison bitch
my prison bitch
and I have no regrets, I got you for a candy bar and a pack of cigarettes
at first you were resistant but now you are my friend
I knew that I would get you in the end ..."
That about says it ...
*Goes to read some tech manuals ...*
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. You really know how to sweet talk a gal.
Ummm... I think you need to update your disclaimer. I think Ms. Rowling would agree that this most certainly does not all belong to her, LOLI was a bit frightened at the amount of glee coming off of your prompter, so I was prepared for the worst. Although this is not my thing, it actually wasn't too bad. This reader was not harmed in the reading of this story... much. The non con thing is really a problem for me, but when it turns out the the unwilling party actually likes what is going on a bit, I can live with it.My first inclination is to say that the dialogue sounds very in character. And I mean that. But I'm not sure how one can tell whether canon Draco would actually talk like that :) Still, the appropriate tone is there with the condescending and vitriol in place.So while I can't say I love the subject matter, it was well written. You can go to the dark side on occasion, just please, please promise to always come back. I'm not brave enough to go there and rescue you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
*laughs* Well, that line dividing the dark side is starting to get a little blurry, isn't it? I will promise to come back, but I'm not sure where to come back to, when the line keeps changing places. That's why you'll have to come with me.And remember, I can't entirely claim this one. I started with "Petrificus Totalus", a few witty bon mots of dialogue, and not much else. In my version Harry had a broken heart, not a T-shirt! So rest easy that I'm not too far gone. Yet. *smiles*
Don't show this to the old blokes in the rest home when you book in. They'll all kark it with fright, or with exertion if it gives them any ideas.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of The Payback)
LOL! I can't take as much credit for the smokin' hot action in this one. That goes to my co-author, sadly. In my version, there was much wailing and actually some odes to a marble statue. Thankfully, she whipped it into porn-worthy shape! I think I lost my mojo, and I need to be packed off the old folks' home where I belong!Although, who knows? Those old guys might be surpringly kinky in there. What a thought. *shudders*