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Saturday Night Drabbles The Mentor
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The Mentor

1: The Mentor

The Mentor

ApollinaV

15 Reviews   |   15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 1,075 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus is paired with a novice professor.

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Chapter 1: The Mentor


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ApollinaV

Member Since 2008  |  25 Stories  |  Favorited by 97  |  169 Reviews Written  |  627 Review Responses

Like many proud alumni of the honorable Hufflepuff House, ApollinaV is a rabbid Huffle-hugger, champion pear-tickler, and founding member of Cleansweep-Streakers Guild (the AV-Eyeful is so named in her honor). Since graduating Hogwarts, she done 'responsible' and 'professional' things - and resolves not to do that anymore. Dreadful amounts of paperwork.

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10/10

cenicienta

"The Robe, a barrier between him and the unwashed, nose-picking masses" that was superb!

10/10

blackeyedlily

This was a fun read. I would enjoy reading the subsequent scene!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Thank you.  I only intended it to be a one-shot, but I appreciate the sentiment.  AV

10/10

braye27

Don't you just love it when Snape talks himself into looking forward to spending time with Miss Granger?  I do!Very nicely done!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Doesn't he just?  Clearly a man who doesn't know how to spot a good thing.  Thanks!  AV

10/10

Aurette

"Did it merit celebration? A handshake? Dinner? Sex? Calling her Hermione, as she demanded?"I love this line, it has just the right amount of snark and exasperiation, balanced with insecure cluelessness that he would die before admitting.Brilliant!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Thank you

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

!  I'm so glad it worked.  AV

0/10

pusswuss

Love your  Snape.Reading this makes me laugh.You're one of my favourite authors.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Why thank you!  *blushes*  AV

10/10

sregner

I love new stories on Monday that are this good!!!  Marvelous and a favorite now

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Ah, this is a spill-over story from Saturday Night Drabbles on the Chatzy.  You should join in, you might like it.  We get together, chat, pass prompts, and occasionally write.  Submissions go through the Q same-day.  Thanks! AV 

10/10

christev

LOLI just loved this from start to finish! You've got Severus' hilariously snipey sarcasm down, and one almost thinks he believes himself about not being able to stand Granger. Fortunately, she's got his measure, and I'll just bet she researched his favorite liquor as well. I also love his curt replies to her epic memos!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

*blushes*  Thank you V.  Oh yeah, she's got his measure.  Might be a fun prompt to see how she researches his favorite liquor and details.  AV

0/10

Javoher

Oh my, that was hilarious!!  Just what I needed after a long day.  Thank you!

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Great - I'm so glad it hit the right note!  Thank you for reading. AV

10/10

debjunk

LOL, cute!  The snarkmaster at his finest.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Ahem.  That's Professor Snarkmaster.  *grins*  Thanks Deb!  AV

10/10

MollysSister

You do Snape the swarmy put upon bastard so well. Make me want to reread TGC. Heh! 

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

*grins*  But that's just because I adore swarmy-put-upon-bastard so much.  Isn't Snape marvelous!  Thanks!  AV

10/10

sunny33

Very cute the way he tries to totally deny he is interested. We seem to have this theme going about Severus and his... er... personal activities... ;)

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

I, for one, thoroughly enjoy all the talk about Snape's personal activities.  Bring on the smut!  AV

0/10

quaffswinegaily

I love how she gets under his skin without him being willing to admit it.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

*grins*  Why thank you!  AV

10/10

snitchette

I hope the liquor's helped things for them both... *wink*

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

I think with or without the liquor, Hermione's going to have her way with him.  He probably won't know what hit him.  Thanks! AV

10/10

beaweasley2

 Oh my this is wonderfully funny!  You have him in true canon form and I totally love his inner dialogue. His responces to her 'notes' (gads - a four foot note! one that was six!I thought notes were short? Silly me.) really he is so priceless in this! I throughly enjoyed the story.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

Why thank you Beaweasley!  I'm so happy it got a good chuckle.  Conflicted-Snape is so much fun to poke and play around with.  AV

10/10

Clairvoyant

I love it!  Sweet and spicy like the best Chinese take-away!  And funny, of course.  "...a barrier between him and the unwashed, nose-picking masses."  Ha, ha, ha!  That explains it.

Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Mentor)

*nods* I would give those nose-picking masses wide berth.  Thank you my love!  AV

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