Frosted Blossoms

7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Drabble/100-Word Malfoy Manor 392 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Her roses bloomed, spectacular and brilliant in the light of a summer day. Yet every year those vibrant blossoms withered away, captured by the frosty hand of nature. She could not help but envy the simplicity of their life.

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Chapter 1: Frosted Blossoms

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sunny33

Oh, poor Narcissa, and lovely analogy. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

What a sad reflection of her life. Beautifully written, so that you can almost - yes, can feel her depression.

Response from DarkFate (Author of Frosted Blossoms)

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed this little fic. :)

10/10

Pennfana

We rarely get to hear anything from Narcissa's point of view, and I'm glad you took the time to write this. Thanks for sharing it.

Response from DarkFate (Author of Frosted Blossoms)

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it :) I do wish I knew more about Narcissa, I guess this is just one version of how her life could have been like. Thanks again!

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quaffswinegaily

So sad to feel so trapped

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morgaine_dulac

Very sad, but very beautiful at the same time.

Response from DarkFate (Author of Frosted Blossoms)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

10/10

snitchette

This is sad. It reminds me of all those girls a century or two ago that were married to unloving men. Some of them died from melancholy and I fear, one day, she might too.

Response from DarkFate (Author of Frosted Blossoms)

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. Now that you mention it, Narcissa does remind me of some victorian wife, doing what is expected and playing into her "role" as a Malfoy wife. Thanks again! :)

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HermioneJeanSnape

Ouch. Lucius seems to be in a mood. I must say, I prefer Lucius/Narcissa loving each other, but this is so very poetically written.

Response from DarkFate (Author of Frosted Blossoms)

Hmm so I partially agree with you. I do like the idea of Lucius and Narcissa loving each other, but I also tend to end up making Lucius turn evil-ish later. I think they did in the beginning, but something happens that makes Lucius turn nasty over the years. But that's just my take on it.Once again, I'm very happy to see that you liked this one. This is one of my favourite fics of mine. Thank you!-DF

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