Great beginning!....when's the next chapter up???
(yes, I choose to ignore "completed" or endings I don't like.)

Draco really needed someone to care that year. :)

A very interesting beginning. I am certain that putting the "completed" mark was a mistake and will be rectified soon. (I always wondered why those oh so good-hearted Gryffindors never actually thought of trying to understand the guy and helping him.)

Very nice. I like it.