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A Long Day
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Very sweet, and dead on for both Luna and Greg.
Very sweet, and dead on for both Luna and Greg.
Response from blue artemis (Author of A Long Day)
Thank you! I love Luna. I wasn't certain about Greg, but I'm glad it worked.
When I saw this pairing, I just HAD to look. I was thinking "What an odd pairing... What she doing...?" This is so sweet and adorable. Very Luna! And the end is very Goyle. I like the beginning, because I'd like to think that these "kids" would grow up to be relative pleasant adults once their parents weren't there looming over them like a bad cloud. FIVE STARS!
Response from blue artemis (Author of A Long Day)
Thank you!
Typical of him, really...
Response from blue artemis (Author of A Long Day)
He's not a quick thinker. Thanks for the review!
Sqweeee! thank you! LOL Loved that you use Greg and Luna! It was so perfect, her trying to help him out of the goodness of her heart. Twenty points! You've earned them!
Response from blue artemis (Author of A Long Day)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
That was the prompt but it's not very nice. Maybe next time he'll be more chivalrous.
Response from blue artemis (Author of A Long Day)
I know. I wrote to the prompt, but I'm thinking that he's planning to write her a note, or send her something. He was startled, and he had a bad day. Thanks!