nicely  written.

Okay, except for Ginny, Harry, Neville and Hannah, not one of these is a canon pairing. Good job! I startled my mother when I laughed. ^_^

That's absolutely wondeful. I can easily imagine an overbearing Narcissa wanting everything perfect for her precious little boy.

A truly amusing story, I loved it.

Good show!  I really like this characterization of pretty much everyone.  I cannot swallow Ron/Pansy, but everything else was great, so I'll take my own fandom hangups and shove 'em.  The darts, the parallelism, all just dear.  You didn't write this for me, but you know, it almost feels like you did.  :)

that nothing is only too well known when you have children, only its pronounced 'nothink' lol

great story