Fool
Chapter 1 of 1
luvsevHermione receives letters from someone she doesn't know.
ReviewedThere’s more to me than what you’ve seen, what you’ve been told. It’s the way I was brought up – to hate what I don’t know. I’ve judged you, fought you over things in which you have no control. My folly, yes. I am a fool.
M.
She read the short missive, twisting one lock of hair as her eyes focussed on the word “fool”.
Fool? I know you not, so I cannot say. You have simply followed the example bigots have established. A poor excuse if it remains your belief. You want me to understand? Show me, I implore.
H.
He gasped aloud, not daring to believe what she had replied.
Bigots, indeed. I cannot show who I am... No one would believe. It is only a lie.
The more she read of this stranger’s letters, the more curious she grew. Who was this person who suffered so?
A lie? Why must you hide, keep who you are caged inside?
Loyalty is everything, Hermione. Opinions must sometimes be hidden... There are worse things to lose than one’s life, even if it is a life built upon a lie.
A life built upon lies is not a life at all.
He read the only line and wept for the first time in years. The truth he could no longer hide; who he was would not remain a lie.
If I told you who I am, what would you say?
Tell me, and we shall see.
Weeks passed without a word from the mysterious writer. One mid-December morning, she found a folded note lying on her doormat. She read it quickly and then saw the figure leaning against the oak tree.
Draco Malfoy.
She walked over to him and whispered into his ear, ‘You are not half the fool I’ve been.’
A/N: Thank you to my oh-so-amazing beta, kittylefish. Her talents are unparalleled, I say.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Fool
6 Reviews | 8.33/10 Average
It's almost like a lyrical poem. I like the give and take between them. ^_^
Response from luvsev (Author of Fool)
Wow, what a compliment! Thanks!
It's good to know people realize their mistakes and are willing to change. Especially Draco.
Response from luvsev (Author of Fool)
He's had a lot of years as well as a war and its subsequent trials to provide time for reflection. I guess he's realised, much like most of us, that there are some things we need to give up in order to have a decent life.
Anonymous
Nice.
A warm, serious, and solemn piece. A pleasure to read.
Good work!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
good job, hon! i like it even more now. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of Fool)
*smiles* Thanks, dear! Your comments helped me get this just right.
It's sad and hopeful all at once. So beautiful. This was my favorite dyno-drabble for Feb 2010.
Response from luvsev (Author of Fool)
*beams* Thank you so much! And wow, it was your favourite? I'm really flattered!