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Cruel Fates

12 Reviews | 5.0/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

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Severus contemplates his embarrassment over his Patronus after an incident in Charms class. Written for Lady Whiteheart, whose adorable little story, Just A Happy Little Thought, inspired this drabble.

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Chapter 1: Cruel Fates

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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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debjunk

Definitely not fair, but there are better things in store, right bea?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Debjunk, HI! wow. Have you read Lady Whiteheart’s story, Just A Happy Little Thought? I was like, oh, how sad... but I opened up to review, and my fingers started typing... and suddenly I had this little drabble on my review for her. It just tumbled out on the box! So I told my beta about it and she wanted to see it... so -- then I get my review responce and Lady Whiteheart granted me permission to post it! So I did. I know that the rest of the year wasn't all that great and Lily chose James... but most of us have one big heartbreak in our teen years, right? I mean, we all had one love in school that didn't go how we wnated. But he grows up and eventually... Thank you for the review, doll. I do appreciate your reading it.

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

I haven't read that one. Another to add to my growing list of catchup fics!

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snapesbeatrice

Such a bittersweet story--lovely.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Yes, unfortunately a sad one. I'm glad you liked it.

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sunny33

Aww. Poor Sev. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

I know, but he'll be all right. Hugs~

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kimjo2

precious and sad. thanks and smoochies

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Yes it is. Thank you for reading, kimjo. Smoochies and hugs back~

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morgaine_dulac

Life sure isn't fair. And his soulmate let him down :(

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

No, unfortunately it isn't always fair. If Lily really was his soulmate? Thank you very much for the review.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

Don't get me started on what I think Lily was .... :P

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sevibaby

You know that this is fantastic. Lots of hugs and kisses. Would it help if I said more more more. Thanks for sharing.Sevibaby

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

No, I really love what you've said - thank you for it. Oh, you want more of this drabble! I'm currently working on Self-Writing Parchment and will be updating Consequences of Meddling With Time soon. Hugs and kisses back to you~

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ClayPotter

This goes very well with Lady Whiteheart's story. I can just see it all happening in my head. Well done.I wrote a story about soul mates and how they may not necessarily end up as lovers, but help each other advance spiritually. That is their true mission. This was the reason Lily had to marry James Potter and die at Voldemort's hand. To turn Snape back to the light. That was her mission. These two stories back up my theory :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Thank you very much. It's very flattering that you can see this that way. Oh I am now curious about your story! What is it, which one? I would like to read it.Thank you for the review, Clay. hugs~

Response from ClayPotter (Reviewer)

It's called "the Potion Master's Assistant." I began it before DH came out, not sure if Snape would live or die. It was my first fic. I am re-reading it now, and although I would make a nip here and a tuck there, perhaps even add a few words here and there, I am still pretty happy with it. I even managed to make it conform to canon after DH came out!I had not yet read any SS/HG fics, so the love interest is an OC. If you like tales about spiritual connections and reincarnation, you may find it interesting.Don't give up on "Secret Recipe." I'm still working on it, slowly but surely.

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severuslover

Aww...such a bittersweet story. Cute idea. Nice job. I really liked the concept.~Jen

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Thank you very much. The idea - I have to give Lady Whiteheart her due, as well as the concept. She gracefully allowed me to extend on it an share it with you. Thank you for the review, doll. Hugs~

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snitchette

Anyway she wasn't his soulmate. Hermione is, so he's better off with her *wink*

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

I think I agree there! Still, it was a sad time of his life. Thank you for the review.

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blue artemis

I just want to hug Severus.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Cruel Fates)

Okay, I'm sure he'd appreciate that. lol Thank you for the review.

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gersknightlady