Hole

TheDeepEnd

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Mystery/Suspense Poetry: Free Form 353 Words 1 Chapter Complete

This was written for a dream I had.

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Chapter 1: Hole

About TheDeepEnd

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TheDeepEnd

Member Since 2009 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 0 Reviews Written | 1 Review Response

24.
Writer.
Loves Harry Potter.
Reads a lot.

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10/10

Ghost_AM

I really like your work. This one implies a lot, which is an excellent literary device. Implication causes the mind to pull images of association. Also, don't let anyone bug you about rhymes. There is more beauty in a bare soul than when it's painted with logic.

10/10

Anonymous

Well done.

Very visceral and macabre; a truly dark and mysterious work

Author's Response: Oh, thank you :) Yeah, it wasn't the nicest dream to have. I don't know why I did, either.

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