Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora
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Lucius Malfoy in a Muggle department store on Christmas Eve buying Narcissa a Muggle charm bracelet
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That was funny! I can just imagine our Lucius in Selfridges, eyeing up the saleswenches! :)
Good portrait of an aristocrat caught in a shopping mob - and a philandering one at that.
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Thanks for reviewing! This was my first attempt at fanfic. Glad someone picked up on the philandering part :)
That was adorable. Very Lucius.
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Wow! Thankyou for the review.
Brilliant, dear! His internal voice sounds just like him, and the general tone of the story is just as elegant as he is. You have a good ear and eye for these things.
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Thankyou very much for the review. I tried really hard to get Lucius' voice and thoughts right, so I'm glad you think I succeeded.
If Lucius thought Christmas Eve shopping was bad, wait until he goes out post Christmas. Poor Lucius.
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Mmm... if post-Christmas sales everywhere else in the world are the same as post-Christmas sales in Australia, Lucius is in for a nasty shock.
£4670? Holy cripes! That's true love, haha.LOVED your description of the Muggle babies and teens!!
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Yep true love... and being a very very wealthy Malfoy, probably just a minor expense (unless the Aurors did take all his money post-Voldemort). Re: describing Muggle babies and teens - it was fun to write them as I see them sometimes (working in a cafe means you see a LOT of humanity walking past).Thankyou very much for the review!
I had no idea about these products before reading your story and after visiting the link you gave, all I can think is that these products are WAY OVERPRICED.Thanks for enlightening me.
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Yep - they certainly are. And people still keep buying them... at least over here in Australia. It seems to be mostly about the status + cost though (which is probably half the reason Narcissa was interested in them in my fanfic), although the beads and things are quite pretty.Thanks for your comments
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Well done! Heh. Selfridges. I probably would have hexed the baby anyway. 
Author's Response: Well I thought about hexing the baby, but the story was looking pretty shaky at that point so I thought I'd better move right along.
Next time tho, any baby that drools or sicks all over Lucius's shoulder isn't going to be so lucky!
Author's Response: Thankyou very much for the review :D
He's never heard of the New Year sales, has he? ;)
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Obviously not!There may be a sequel to this somewhere down the track...
Response from gracie_snape (Author of Lucius Malfoy and the Quest for Pandora)
Thankyou very much for the review, too!