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Beautiful Bird
sshg31651 Reviews | 6.55/10 (51 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
Even the bravest of men can be brought to his knees, especially when faced with his worst nightmare.
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Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction. I read and sometimes, I write.
Reviews for Beautiful Bird
Okaaay? And maybe not so clear. It's still a good story. I hope we get an explanation soon. ^_^
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
*grins* It's slowly be revealed, little by little, but the full story isn't known until the last drabble of the last installment is read. ;) Thanks so much!
Oh, I'm so glad that the baby is all right. Potion, what potion?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
All will be explained by the end ... promise. :) Thank you!
Awww man, how sad..I'm crying now..Poor Severus, why can't it be known that the baby is his?? Oh I hope they will be together in the end...Well done!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much! I promise all your quesitons will be answered by the end! :)
So now my question turns to why -- Is the war still ongoing? Does he feel unworthy of love? or Was she already married and this was "for the best"? I look forward to seeing if I am anywhere near the mark. Thanks for posting such an excellent story, JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Why is definitely the question. As to your other questions ... i can only answer one. The war is over. as for the other ones ... answers are coming. Um. Eventually. ;)Thanks so much!
Was the baby given something so it would look like a Weasley instead of a Snape? I can hardly wait for your update.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
The answer to your question is in the installment I just posted! :)Thanks so much!
They gave the baby Polyjuice wow.....this is interesting....
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
The did. The question is why. *waggles eyebrows* More on that later! :D Thank you!
Oh, dear, what have they done?! I love his tenderness, and her fear is alarming. What's happening here? With just a few carefully chosen words, you've made me long for so much more!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much, my friend! I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!
Anonymous
Wow. Very moving and nice.
Fine work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More tomorrow!
This is very interesting. I like the inclusion of the lullaby and wonder at it's meaning to the story as a whole. I look forward to the continuation. Sara
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much! The lullaby was a fabulous find -- totally by accident. But it fit the story so well, I just had to use it. It definitely does have meaning -- the next verse, especially. (We'll see it again in the third installment.) ;)Thanks again!
Oooh, that's interesting! was that baby a redhead when she was born? Hmmm? Looking forward to more. Thanks
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
That is the question! The answer is in tomorrow's installment. ;) Thank so much!
This is a very interesting story. I am not sure what it is about this that makes it feel so different. Maybe it is the last exchange that tells me that something else is going on. I look forward to seeing just what that is. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
This one is a slow build, I think. Some answers with each installment, until all is revealed in the final one. Thanks so much!
Oh, I can't wait.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you! More tomorrow! :)
Red curls? Don't tell me they kidnapped her baby with Ron!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Maybe ... maybe not! LOL ;) The answer to that will come in the next installment! Thanks so much!
OH MY, Is the baby Severus's?? This is excellent and I can't wait to see what happens next..
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Very good question. The answer comes in the installment! :)Thank you very much!
What a beautiful beginning. I am looking forward to seeing the rest of the story.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you very much! More tomorrow!
Severus' singing is so sweet, but surprisingly in character the way you write it. Yay for all the support and love.
Thank goodness for potions, it is Severus' baby! But you raised more questions than you answered, fiend.
Ah, nicely resolved and loved the story title's meaning. Well done!
Interesting twist that everyone's in on it, but whom are they hiding her from (and why)?
Hmm, trying to disguise the baby... Smart baby - doesn't want to be disguised does she?
Very intriguing start. What have they done??
Aha, so it was Greyback! Very clever. :)
Does Voldemort want the baby?
She is his! :)
Hmm, a mystery. I like mysteries! :)