Chapter Four
Chapter 4 of 4
sshg316Even the bravest of men can be brought to his knees, especially when faced with his worst nightmare.
Hermione entered the upstairs bedroom with a relieved yet heavy heart. Evelyn lay bundled in her cradle, her dear little face free of care as she peacefully slumbered. Her gaze then slid to where Snape stood by the small, dingy window, his head bowed, a worn bit of parchment clutched in one hand.
On silent feet, she cautiously approached the mercurial wizard, unsure of her welcome after the evening’s events. As if he sensed her presence—and her reticence—he turned, his eyes glittering in the candlelight. Without a word, he opened his arms, and she fell into his embrace.
*
Lying side by side, he had held her tightly, whispering words of contrition and regret, until his exhaustion had overcome him. Gently, so as not to wake him, Hermione loosened his grip on the parchment, pulling it free of his fisted hand; then she read again the terrible words that had struck terror into Snape’s heart.
Congratulations, my traitorous friend. I’ve heard rumours that you are to be married, and to such a tasty morsel, too. I cannot wait until the day you have a child. You know how I like kids—yours would be my favourite, I promise you…
*
Hermione shuddered, burrowing closer to Snape’s side. Of their own accord, her fingers lovingly reached out to ease the deep, ever present furrow between his brows.
He had thought only to protect her and their unborn child, but even so, she had been terribly hurt by his decision to cancel their wedding and pretend that the baby was Ron’s. She had borne the pain, however, believing that the situation would be resolved prior to their child’s birth.
She had been wrong.
The terrible deception had continued, his fear for his daughter—his only flesh and blood—outweighing all other considerations.
*
The house was abuzz with activity; Dumbledore’s Army had arrived. Assignments were being given for patrolling the neighbourhood, as well as guarding the house and its inhabitants.
Snape sat in a high-backed chair, watching soberly.
Sensing his distress, she went to him, placing a hand upon his shoulder.
“Severus?”
After a long moment, he replied, “I am her father. It is my family who is threatened, and yet I have chosen to hide, like the snake that I am.”
She opened her mouth to deny his words, when he rose to his feet.
“No more. It is time to strike.”
*
She waited in the sitting room, a fussing Evelyn held to her breast. She feared for her lover’s safety and that of her friends. Snape, Ron, and Harry had spent weeks perfecting the plan that would put a final end to the threat to her child.
Now, it had begun.
After glancing out the window at the full moon, she closed her eyes and offered a prayer for her loved ones.
Her beautiful bird squirmed in her arms. “Shh, your papa will come soon.”
And through her tears, she sang:
Oh, hush thee, my baby,
Thy sire was a knight…
*
He returned with the others the following morning, bloodied, battered, and with new battle scars—but these, she knew, he would bear proudly. Wrapped in her embrace, he told her how the bait had been taken, how he’d been surprised by how haggard, how old the animal who had driven such fear into their hearts had appeared. Even so, when cornered, the beast had attacked, and none had escaped unscathed.
“Any bitten?” she asked, fearing his reply.
“A few scratches—nothing more.”
Overcome with relief, she wept in his arms as he whispered over and over again, “She’s finally safe.”
*
Snape stood before the fireplace, relishing its warmth. From his pocket, he removed the bit of parchment that had been his constant companion since the moment it had been delivered, a reminder of all that he’d stood to lose. For too long, he’d let his fear overrule his judgement, and his family had suffered for it.
Never again.
Without a thought, he tossed the parchment into the fire, watching until all that remained were ashes. Fenrir Greyback would never threaten another child.
Hearing the sounds of mother and child in the room above, he smiled and then joined his family.
A/N: And that's the end! I hope you enjoyed the conclusion. If you're still confused (hopefully you're not), then feel free to ask questions. :)
According to the name dictionary I used, Eileen is the Irish equivalent of Evelyn, and both names, of course, mean “beautiful bird.” (According to some other dictionaries, they mean “life” or “living”, but obviously I went with this version!)
In the letter to Snape, I took from a line in chapter 27 of HBP, where Greyback says, “But you know how much I like kids, Dumbledore.” Snape had a very real fear of werewolves—thanks to his experience as a teenager—and Greyback was known for contaminating children. He would have been aware of Greyback’s proclivity to infect children, and I can only imagine the terror he would have felt at the threat to his own child.
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That was beautiful! I loved it. Thanks for a great story.
I couldn't review for the first three chapters because i was so confused about what exactly was going on, but everything came together at the end very well. I'd have never put the two facts together, Fenrir saying he liked children, and Snape's fear of werewolves, but it totally makes sense in the "how did i miss that?" Sort of way.
Oh goodness... my heart was aching the whole way, and when he finally burnt the note I let out a little cheer. Thank you, thank you, for such a beautiful peice of writing...!
Anonymous
Nice! A very clean and warm ending! Well done!
Now I fully understand everything. I'm relieved they all will be fine from now on. I guess they now have a wedding to plan.
WOW....Well done, I love the ending...I'm glad he took care of Greyback...Excellent story..
Very good final chapter in a lovely, short story. You removed all confusion for me nicely. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to your next story. JoAnne
I love this. But, it's too short! ^_^
And it is all finally explained! It all makes sense now- the color changing hair, the potion, the allergic reaction, all of it. I'm surprised that Severus hid though- he has always said (and he is right) that he is no coward.
I wasn't confussed once. It was beautiful. You had me thinking several outcomes for a while, but I think that's what you were trying to do. Nicely written :)
Anonymous
“He wants to use a spell, one that would alter Evelyn’s DNA… permanently,”
Screech!
O.o
DNA?
What Wizard or Witch would bandy about an acronym like DNA? Does the HP universe, or even JKR for that matter, even know what the heck Deoxyribonucleic acid is?
Talk about driving over an IED! Boy did that kill the moment!
Still, it was a well-written piece!
Author's Response: You're the first person to mention that! LOL
Sorry that threw you out of the story, but I guess I don't understand why they wouldn't know about DNA. They may be a separate society, but they still interact with the Muggle world quite a bit. With Muggle-borns entering the Wizarding world all the time, I don't see how they couldn't know about this sort of thing. And as Hermione is the one who is speaking ... *shrugs*
Hope you can enjoy the rest! Thank you!
EdgeOfDark's response: LOL!
I will enjoy the rest, thank you! ^_^
If I had a dime for everytime I made the same mistake...
What really tore me out of the story was the fact the HP universe treats the Muggle world as a complete mystery even though it exists side-by-side with their own. The characters never mention DVD's, CD, GPS, or even cassette tape decks! If Wizards and Witches can't comprehend proper Muggle dress, can't fathom how to repair simple plumbing, electricitical theory, or understand how a simple radio works, Hermione speaking or not, how in the world would they understand a complex concept like RNA or DNA?
I mean, following HP Canon, it just isn't possible.
Wow.....I hadn't expectedt the threat from Greyback but I really enjoyed reading this.....thanks for the answers. I am so glad that Evelyn can live her life as the person she really is and not a Polyjuice version of someone else.
Anonymous
Warm and moving. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I didn't get it at first....I thought they were doing it to hide it from Ron....obviously not. I think I see why they are protecting her if he is still serving the other master.....oh my what a conundrum! I guess all will be revealed later.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
That's just what I wanted you to think. *grins* I'm getting ready to post the conclusion now, so hopefully all your questions will be answered. A hint though: the story is EWE, so the war is over ...;)Thanks so much!
This is simply gorgeous - mystical and lyrical. Just the sort of thing that I love.....
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :) I'm getting read to post the conclusion now.
I think I got it. And I'm sooo glad Ron isn't the father. And that Severus gave up that stupid idea about changing her DNA. He would have regret it forever.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
He certainly would have regretted it. The conclusion should explain everything. Thanks so much!
Maybe not that clear. Wonder where ROn is and if he is really the biological father or not. I long for the other two chapters.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
*grins* More is on the way!Thank you!
I don't think I've understood everything but I guess more will be revealed in the nest drables. Anyway the song is really lovely.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
It's purposely confusing at this point, yes. Really, it's not til the end that everything becomes clear. :)Thanks so much!
oh.. tears.... lots of them. Just beautiful.... more please...
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
*passes the tissues* Thank you so much! I'm getting ready to post the conclusion in just a few minutes. :)
Beautiful. I looked up the lullaby after the first chapter was posted, but could only find it as a poem. Is it set to music somewhere?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
I love the lullaby! And yes, you can hear a sample at this link:http://www.amazon.com/Scottish-Lullaby-English/dp/B002G7RTRC/ref=sr_1_13?ie=UTF8&s=dmusic&qid=1264775158&sr=8-13Thank you!
Ok just so you know -- No "More pieces fall into place" in this one. For me, at least, it only made the confusion stronger. I am grateful that I only have to wait another day to find out my answers. Thanks for sharing such an intriguing story. JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
*grins* It's the why that still remains, I know. The answer is on its way! :) Thanks so much!
That played out nicely. I assume we'll learn his motivations.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you! Yes, we absolutely will. I'm getting ready to post the last installment now, which should explain everything. :)
WHOA...YAY!! I'm glad he will let the DA help...I LOVE IT!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much!! I'm getting ready to post the last installment now. Hope you enjoy!
O_o is Evelyn Severus' baby? His comments about her resembling her father... but then she changed? Is Hermione giving her Polyjuice Potion?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
*grins* The answers to your question are all about to be answered in part three! Thank you!
Oh this is gooood... cannot wait for the resolution. I am thinking the child is his, disguised with polyjuice to resemble Ron's child?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
Thank you so much,
Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)
! Your question will be answere for certain in the next installment. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it!